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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 17, 2015
    I had to read the first chapter about 15 times before I was able to get all the information from it. Unfortunately, I will not be reading the second chapter despite how good the first chapter was. Purely due to the fact that it's all essentially one run on sentence, if you could please break the first chapter down into paragraphs to make it easier to read I might consider re-reading your story .
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  • From tanyaflorio on March 29, 2010
    PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 02, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LilianaIsabellaSnape on April 26, 2008
    Wow! Poor Hermione! Poor Draco! Poor Blaise!!!
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  • From MegMartini on April 25, 2008
    I really enjoy the story and I'm not trying to flame you or anything but you do realize that england doesn't do the whole Santa thing right? Keep up with the awesome story!!
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  • From ruckfules84 on April 13, 2008
    nooo....poor hermione...poor draco.....her better not do anything stupid...

    love this chappie can't wait for more :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on April 05, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Sevvi on March 20, 2008
    I like the story, and in the first few chapters your grammar was excellent. However, after chapter seven your grammar took a turn. A bad one. Do you have a Beta reader, if you don't I proofread fairly well, at least that's what my friends tell me, and I wouldn't mind doing this for your stories...
    But other wise I enjoyed your story, of hat I have read so far at least. Continue the great writing!
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  • From ANON - The-Muse-In-Me on March 09, 2008
    Omfg.. I think [probably wrongly] that i just figured out what Lucius' plan was.. Did Lucius put Harry under the Imperius Curse and tell him to rape Hermione? Or did someone take Polyjuice Potion to make them look like Harry? If i'm right and they did then that's harsh news..

    - Muse
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  • From ANON - The-Muse-In-Me on March 09, 2008
    Ciao bella =] Come stai?

    Fucking great story!! I was so shocked when Harry raped Hermione! I thought that he was taking her the show her when he was gunnah propose to Ginny or something..!

    Really good story! xPP

    There's quite a few mistake with grammar but not many with spelling. But the story line so makes up for it x]]

    - Muse
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  • From kazfeist on March 07, 2008
    Hopefully, we'll find out the whole story, now. Wonder if Harry was taken over by Voldemort? :D
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  • From ANON - Smartgirl13w on February 28, 2008
    Hey, I just wanna let you know that so far, I love this story! I am only on "Just Wash It," but it's looking good!
    BUT, just so you have bra sizes correct, I'm not a specialist or anything, but I know Hermione Granger would NEVER be a 38 ANYTHING unless she doubled her body weight. She would be a 32-34. If you are trying to get the point across that she now has some rather substantial breastage going on, 34D would be right. But a 38C would give her a much larger midriff, and a seemingly smaller chest.
    Not trying to be creepy, I'm a married woman, I just thought I'd let you know!
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  • From DB1 on February 23, 2008
    @26 awesome story, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From kazfeist on February 06, 2008
    So! Either it wasn't Harry (Polyjuice), or it was, and Voldie was somehow controlling him, eh? Can't wait to find out which! :D
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  • From LolaDiBlack on February 05, 2008
    ok i'm confused it's Supposed that Harry did it
    but HE doesn't have a clue of what its going on, so if it wasn't
    Harry who did it?....Jane sweet kid it reminds me to plan thme when I
    hit the thirties (ahhh bliss I'm 18 yet), but she stole my heart well what else
    ummm nothing much for now, Please UPDATE soon I beg you

    take care
    Lola

    ps:Jessica and Blaise, WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? O_o
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