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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Royal Veela

By : SevenSword
  • From isadmalfoy on September 27, 2008
    please update soon I want to know if Harry is going to give in for Drac, or if stupid Ron (I realy dislike him especily after the epsode with Harry) is going to get in the way
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  • From ANON - Saigo on September 26, 2008
    ""Dobby will not let Draco Malfoy hurt Harry Potter!" Came a shrill; unexpected cry from the other side of the counter, followed by various cooking utensils."

    GO Dobby!! Hahaha! I'm always reading fics where Harry gets attacked at Hogwarts or something and I'm always wondering where the heck Dobby is while Harry's getting attacked. Helpless!Harry is fun sometimes but I've always wanted to read a veela fic where he's guarded like the crown jewels and pretty dangerous in his own right. So this is just awesome.
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  • From ANON - Saigo on September 25, 2008
    I really really really enjoy the way each character thinks and reacts so distinctly. There's no 'group collective' where they all think the same and agree on everything. There's individuality, everyone is perceiving what's going on differently and reacting differently. There are misunderstandings and conflict and good logic that isn't so great in practice and a bit of human irrationality that comes from thinking with your heart and not your brain.

    Its such a subtle thing but its very hard to find in most stories.
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  • From erospandora on September 22, 2008
    i still love that ron's dad did it XD

    ~eros
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on September 19, 2008
    Still as good as the last time I reviewed. I hope there is more to come and VERY soon! it's getting interesting!

    KCK-Lumcer
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2008
    love this story. They need to stop taking it down!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 14, 2008
    Where did the story go? lol
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  • From PrettyMassacre on September 10, 2008
    I loved it as always. Was happy to see an update. Hope there is another one soon. Huggles :)
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  • From on September 10, 2008
    love it great chater
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  • From Jan on September 10, 2008
    I might not be to happy with Ron for betraying Harry with his secret, but I'm proud that he didn't snitch on Harry to Lucius even though Lucius still got the info he was after... but he still doesn't know where Harry is yet ^_~

    please update chapter 30 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From Darkless on September 10, 2008
    Well, you know you can't leave it hanging there. Get on with the next chapter please...hai aku, onegai!

    Constructive critisizm: Great story, fun interactions and situations, but your grammer and punctuation skills are on the poor side and need work. Still, it's easy to read in spite of the errors. Polishing it up with proper corrections would only make it better. Also, please refrain from extra-long *** lines that make the words stretch longer than the window can accomodate.

    Thank you, and please hurry! :)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 10, 2008
    Oh goodness!! That was priceless..Arthur helpin his kids get out..haha :D LOVED IT!! YOu must post more chapters... Waitin really is toooo hard!! YOUR KILLIN ME OVER HERE!! I want H/D ACTION!! HAHA But very good chapter!!
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  • From Selera on September 10, 2008
    *Yawns* Keep posting thats all I ask. ^^ Sometimes it takes awhile for a story to get reviews.
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  • From UnseeliePhairie on September 10, 2008
    Wow, I am impressed with Ron... the way you set it up; typical Ron but completely unexpected by me. Thanks for yet another wonderful chapter.

    ...now bring on the smut! *takes out camera and cell phone*

    -grumbles- I know your holding out on me -glances at your computer screen- now where is it?!

    -sigh- Guess I'll have to wait with everyone else...-sigh-
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 29!!! Go Arthur!!! Thank goodness they had help to escape!!!
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