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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei
  • From ANON - on June 26, 2016

    Hi ReiRei,

     

    Firstly I love your stories, long with intricate plots.

    Two small things I have noticed, in chapter 5 I think it is (starts with the line about Hermione being cursed with easy tears) it says laboratory rather then lavatory and in chapter 7 when describing outfits for Lilly to wear to Hogsmeade you describe her hair as Titan (a form of giant) when I think you meant titian (based off a painter who loved painting red headed women)

    Can't wait for the newest story to be done.

    Thanks for the effort and time that goes into something that has provided me with much entertainment.


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2014
    This was a very interesting story line.. there were a few punctuation errors and extra words that threw off the flow of the story, but over all it was different enough that you almost didn't notice. Now to see if you have any recent stuff..
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  • From ANON - Merle on August 12, 2012
    I. Just. Wow...
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  • From deedeebug on June 28, 2012
    Really Great story well done!!! I am a hard core SS/HG shipper and I really loved this unique story!!!
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  • From ktgymnastics on April 17, 2011
    This was such an amazing story! The epilogue was so cute:)
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  • From Aoidragon on May 27, 2010
    loved the story xD though tbh it seemed like 2-3 stories crammed into one, i just loved it :p
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 14, 2009
    loved it --- totally enjoyed reading this, thank you for writting it.
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  • From GuiltyPleasure on June 30, 2009
    I'm a little disturbed. If Hermione didn't show back up until 2014, then Snape should be around 55. And her body is still 16. I can handle a 20 year difference, but 40 is a bit much.
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 07, 2008
    Easily one of the best stories I have ever read. Just thrilling, terrifying, desperately sad and angsty, but with a perfect ending. And I don't believe that I have ever read a better epilogue. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love you. I really do. You are awesome and beautiful and talented and I love you.

    ~Mia
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  • From dinkyjew on November 09, 2008
    this was an excellent read. time well spent thanks
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  • From neelix on September 27, 2008
    I know it's a while since you wrote this, but I have just found it and spent the whole of my Saturday reading it from start to finish.

    I forgot the ironing, was late making dinner and even forgot to get coffee..... It was riveting from the start and I totally loved it.

    Thank you!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 07, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 22, 2008
    Re: chapter two

    *SQUEE* Mmm, mmm, mmm, such a lovely, sexy, yummy kiss--lucky girl!
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  • From goofball on April 29, 2008
    Found your story in SoftObsidian74's reading list. Promising start. I'll bookmark this story and will happily read more tomorrow! :o)
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  • From genna on April 04, 2008
    This was an exciting look at HP fic.

    You gave us it all. Time turner. Generations: Marauders, HP/HG, new offspring. even dealt with werewolves.

    The only thing you missed was the Weasleys (I really like them). Not too shabby.

    If you ever go back and tighten up this story, look to the area where Hermione comes back to Hogwarts. There is a lot of detail there that takes away from your story. Also, what gives Harry the right to take 3 years away from Snape by leaving him in a coma? There is something bad guy-ish about that.
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