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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei
  • From ANON - kalderas on October 19, 2007
    i kneel down, clasp my hands together, and look up towards heaven. hello god. *waves* there is one thing i forgot to add in my last prayer, ss/hg lemonade. pleeeaaaaase! i'll b good! and dont b stingy. if i'm gonna hav to do all this do-goodin', then no cheapy quickies. i cross myself and run of to bake cakes for all the world's hobos.
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  • From ANON - kalderas on October 18, 2007
    "Maybe" has become the most beautiful word in the world. pfft, of course GOD is gonna tell me to hav faith. every time i review i feel like a petulant child begging her mommy for sweets. me: i want that one. god rei: here hav this one. me again: I WAAANT THAT ONE!! god rei: well this is what ur getting. then i stomp my feet, stick out my tongue, and run off to sulk. there the determined, fast thinkin' mione i luv. yay! so thats how lily and james happen. phew, i thought they would never get there. and wat anise up too? is draco still unconscious? boy is he gonna b pissy. and frank is still forgotten in the lake, poor chap. ahh sev, y do i alway go for the crazies? i want my mione happy, and seeing as her happiness is dependent on snape he better shape up. OR FACE THE WRATH OF GOD'S CHILD BRAT!! WMAHAHA! >;p
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  • From ANON - CB13 on October 18, 2007
    I really like this take on the Hermione-travels-backwards-in-time theme. It's really good storytelling, and thank you for sharing your creativity with the rest of us. A few technical pointers - you frequently switch tense, going from present tense (she shuts the door) to past tense (She said to Lily...). This makes the story a little hard to read. Also, remember that you usually don't use apostrophies on plural words. When you want to assign possession - "Hermione's wand" or "Lily's eyes" - then the apostrophe is correct. Otherwise, just stick an s on the end and call it a day. (I mean, ususally. English. Pain-in-the-ass language if there ever was one.)

    Hope your workload is light tomorrow, too! Thanks again.

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From ANON - snapeaddiction on October 18, 2007
    Arghhhh! I can't take it. More. I need more. Right now, please, if you don't mind. I just can't go the whole night without knowing what happens next (especially since I smell citrus-y goodness!).
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 18, 2007
    Mwhahaha! An excellent update, indeed! :D Hmm... Hermione called him a death eater... wouldn't severus find that odd she knew that?
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 18, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - GodricsGossip on October 18, 2007
    Fantastic! Another brillant chapter. I am started to get into this story alot.

    Can you please add more chapters soon?
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  • From Obezyanka on October 18, 2007
    I love you for loving me for loving you for loving me. Can't wait for next chapter.
    :-)
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  • From myangeldraco on October 18, 2007
    I really don't know what to say, I love this fic you know that, you suprise me everyday with how often it is updated. I felt sorry for Hermione having to watch Lily and Snape. I wonder how Anise will help with all this now? please update as soon as you can xxaxx
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 18, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From SorceressFujin on October 18, 2007
    OoOO! Another excellent chapter! So Exciting!
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  • From reirei on October 18, 2007
    Brava Sampadoria.

    I appreciate your honesty with me about the charachter. Too be honest, Severus Snape is a bastard. He became a romantic figure in my mind after the death and very little is explored about his Death Eater lifestyle before.

    I agree that although Severus is abusive and strange in this time it is for a reason. Death Eaters are evil. Plain and simple. Severus is evil and misguided. There is room for redemption obviously, but I am planning this very canon and close to the breast.

    What terrible action can happen to someone to jolt their entire life into one of unwavering repentence?

    Something dramatic, probably angsty and not nice. Unfortunately I dont see fluffy being a part right now. Severus never forgave himself for Lily in the story.

    Ever wonder why?

    Hermione knows him in the future, when he is softer, and more noble etc... Knowing that someone can be that eventually probably gives her a large tolerance for his crap. But yes, even Hermione has a limit.


    Let's find out what it is shall we?
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  • From Sampdoria on October 18, 2007
    To be honest, I am not sure I like this story. I love the Hermione/Severus pairing, but I have grown steadily more and more tired of the stories based on how much hell and torture Severus can put Hermione through and then Hermione still loves and forgives him because "he looooves her" in the end and that makes everything all rigth, the tunes of abused women all over the world. I will read a chapter or two more thoug, with the wain hope that Severus really must pay a price of immence hurt for his treatment and betrayal of Hermione. I don't have high hopes, this stories are usually very predictable, but I am not so far gone yet that I have lost all hope that this fic will be different.
    You write very well, that makes it a pleassure to read you story. Bad writing can ruin the best of plots while good writing can make me read a story I otherwise would not have read. Update soon, and hopefully with a chapter or two that changes Hermione from being a patetic victem for Severus cruelty and into the strong, brave, knowing the difference between what is rigth and wrong, Hermione I like and belive in. At the moment I am not to fond of Severus, he is more a Death Eater coward and whore than a man any woman with a unce of self respect and/or two braincells would want, so if you let him die a horribel death, knowing that he brougth it all on him self with his cowardness, it would suit me just fine. (I do actually love Severus, but I love him as the snarky, cold, honourable, magnificient Potions Master, Spy and hero. You present him quite different from that image, I would never have minded JKR killing of the man you write about, probably would have said it was long overdue, while I am still miffed that JKR killed "my" Severus)
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 18, 2007
    OooOO! I love how things are heating up! :D What a good trick with the stuff in the punch. :D
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 18, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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