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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei

From on January 20, 2008
Read it from beginning to end in the past 3 days and I must say that I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!

Brava my dear. It was awesome.
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From ANON - MJ on January 03, 2008
Hello,

I just stumbled upon your story today and I ended up glued to my computer for the next 3 hours reading it all the way through because it was so addicting. It was amazing and I love how you made the plot so intricate! I kept thinking that I had everything figured out and then you threw something else in. Normally I don't like young-Snape stories but the way you developed his character and refused to turn him into a softie really made the story. So, I just wanted to say what a wonderful story it was and I hope you post more (maybe a sequel or one-shot that focuses on Cissy and Damian or one that focuses on Draco and Anise's life prior to the epilogue?)! Thanks for writing the story!!!!
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From ArabellaSnape on December 27, 2007
Absolutely great story, I love time turner epics and this was an epic. It was always Hermione, not Lily, I could not accept that He did it all for Lily.
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From jacobslove on December 01, 2007
Lovely fic!
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 25, 2007
So AFF wouldn't let me post my final review until today because I "exceeded my limits on posting" for this story yesterday...lol. Anyway....

I'm so glad you didn't kill Draco...I kinda knew in the back of my head that he would live because we both love him so much but I wasn't sure if you had a dark side and was going for a tragedy. I'm really happy that he and Anise got together too. Once again, I hate that I wasn't blessed with the talent to draw because I have some fantastic visual images of how they would look together by the lake that would be great for this story. So Draco is Harry's son-in-law...bizarre and funny! Even though I usually can't stand Snape and Hermione pairings..I'll admit this story made them believable and sexy so kudos to you for pulling that off from a nonbeliever..I like young Snape better but your depictions of him young made him with Hermione more plausible once he aged. Where was he in the Epilogue anyway? I don't remember him being in it...Too old to come out on the platform? lol.

Damian sounds hot...I'd like to see a follow up with him and Narcissa who has to be absolutely gorgeous with parents like that. Anyway, I don't want to blow smoke up your ass but again, this plot was complicated but you managed to make it flow and make it easy to follow for people like me who can't usually do the time travel thing. I hope you're pimping it out other sites to get it more exposure...don't be shy about nominating yourself for fan fic competitions with it either, if one comes around that appropiate for the type of story and pairings, I definitely will.

OK Rei, thanks for sharing this with me...you've gotten to break out of my Draco/Hermione, threesome, and Harry/Draco routine and see that other fics may be worth checking out. See you around the board.

Til your next update or my next review.....

Night Night : )
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
God...I'm not liking you right now...what are you playing at? What a gut wrenching scene...a dead Draco and Anise clinging and crying her heart out....you evil evil woman....I did like the name of the chapter...Obsidian, has a nice ring to it ;)

This can't end like this...I know you love Draco too much to leave him like that..I know it I know it...
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
Are you fucking kidding me!!!! You KILLED Draco? Lucius is behind all of this???? This is NUTS!!! What the fuck??? OMG. This is horrible, horrible.

Aside from the possibility that this fic will end on a very wrong note, your battle scenes with the wolves and the use of the Loa to cure Anise was really creative. Now how will she get the damn thing out of her? Wait a minute..he can't kill Anise can he?? hmmm...OK, back to the story...
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
Oh no! I hope Draco doesn't kill noone...Where is Anise going to hide in battle...I hope she isn't going to be the vessel that serves Hermione's Loa. At first Draco as a werewolf sounded really sexy, now it's just scary. But Anise did get bit too right? hehe....
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
Yay, I was right but OMG! Draco is considered Fenrir's son because Fenrir made him a werewolf? Will Draco make Anise a werewolf and they live happy ever after as werewolves? If Fenrir is killed can Draco go back to being a normal person? Hermione is pregnant? lol, will Snape really marry Hermione? This story is just as wild as your Maelstrom story! Oh I hope Anise and Draco will end up together, they seem to fit.
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
I'm at the end of Ch. 39 and I want to take the guess...Draco's a werewolf??? He's gotta be...too much smelling going on...LOL. Oh I hope I'm right..OK back to reading now..I plan to finish this tonight!
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 23, 2007
I totally didn't see you going where you took this story...I'm on Chapter 36 now...

General comments: It's amazing how you've taken canon and rearranged actual events so that they figure into your plot for entirely different reasons. The scene I'm talking about in particular when Snape gets bit by Nagini was really a "oh wow" moment and I had to read it over twice cause of how cool it was. That was one of my favorite scenes in DH and for you to work Hermione and Snape's love for Hermione into it but keep the dialogue in tact was really genuius. Also, you wonder with the presence of time turners how many times this has happened in the HP universe. The whole thing with the Loa is an interesting subplot and I'm wondering how she's gonna purge herself of that thing...a possessed Hermione sounds like a fun Hermione though..

I hope Draco and Anise end up together but I'm not sure how that would work or what that will mean as far as impact on everyone's lives. I like Anise Potter a lot though and wish she was a more prominent character in other fan fics..I hope you use her again in your future stories. I like rogue werewolf hunter Draco..he seems so badass aka Indiana Jones or Wolverine....just makes him more sexy.

OK, last comment, well more of a question..has this fic been nominated for any awards..it's a real piece of work and most people couldn't pull off the time line stuff..have you entered it into any fan fic contests? You should. If I hear of any, I will....

OK, more later...peace
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 21, 2007
Going to see my folks for Thanksgiving break tommorow. I'm printing out this story to read on the train ride so I should be finished by Friday....I'll give you a big long review sometime then....thank god for good stories to past the time away..I hate long boring rides....I'm excited because when I get back I'll have like 3 stories that will have all new updates to read from you...OK, 'til then Happy Thanksgiving Rei...
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 20, 2007
Yea, the Hermione/Snape sex is hot in this story...you got me genuinely curious about this pairing now...regardless of age...you evil little....

So I just read Chapter 21. Wondering how Lily and James will proceed now that James is a hero of sorts who saved her virtue...will it speed their relationship up or slow it down..will Harry report Goyle and how that might impact things...it seems that Harry probably survives because his daughter is there but I'm a little worried about Neville now 'cause Draco has gone and messed that up a bit...and how in the hell does Snape plan on saving Hermione when he's so hellbent on being a deatheater...this is getting really good but I'm wondering how in the world Hermione will actually make it out of this, I hope you aren't planning to kill her or anything crazy like that...OK, off to bed now..more random thoughts and anxious rants tommorow : )
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From reirei on November 19, 2007
Heh, nah, It took me a whole month to pound it out but to be honest, I use to be a Storyteller for World of Darkness, and the framing and plot telling is suprisingly easy compared to actively responding to 30 different players messing with your plot. :P
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 19, 2007
Oh no...I thought that there was a romance brewing between Anise and Draco...I really liked the way you wrote that dialogue between them...this chapter explained a LOT..I think I can hang with the time travel thing now without getting too confused...did I tell you how brilliant you are, this story is amazing..I know you had to be thinking about this for awhile to write it out the way you did...that or you're just a time travel geek...and I mean that in the most affectionate way possible, I always felt like airhead around those folks, but now I think I got it..yay: )
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