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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei
  • From SorceressFujin on October 15, 2007
    Two excellent updates! I just love how this story is going. :D Hmm... could that potion that made her 'younger' have but a certain aspect back in place? o.O
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  • From scotsgirl on October 15, 2007
    Hi haven't been able to get onto the computer for a couple of days, I was so pleased to see all the updates i could read and each and everyone one was brilliant. You have my undivided attention on this story and i am soooo hooked.Things are definitely different from her time I need to look back see if you have left any hidden clues. Looking forward to more updates.
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  • From SilentTremor on October 15, 2007
    oh my gods, please update soon
    Blessed Be,
    Sandra
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  • From reirei on October 15, 2007
    Madietta- First, I would like to address the past & Present tenses to try to explain what I am doing there. It is intentional. Everything is in the past tense, was, were, etc... EXCEPT, for their thoughts. The thoughts are punctuated by - marks.

    For example.

    ((Hermione WAS washing her face vigorously in the sink.
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  • From chickaboo on October 15, 2007
    I love this! I'm totally hooked and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Michelcrazy on October 15, 2007
    i loveeeeeeeee this fic! it's amazingly HOT and i love snape's sexiness.
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on October 14, 2007
    oh man, this is a lot harder than she thought!! me too lol ^_^ i love this story! update soon!
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  • From Carine on October 14, 2007
    Hi reirei,
    the sexual torture by our skilled potion master in chapter 6 seems to be even more effective than the worst "Cruciatus".I think I would tell him my darkest secrets(HiHi...)I love your story so much,it's getting more and more mysterious as there's another one besides Hermione who is messing with the past.Actually Lily seems to have a crush on Frank Longbottem,that's why both Harry and Neville are feeling sick,because they never might have been born if the past isn't being changed quickly.I cannot wait to read more....LOL Sureves Epans
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  • From kalderas on October 14, 2007
    ahh well lookit here! i barely blink and ya gotta whole slew of new chapters! bravo to the speedy updates, and ty for the longer chaps, pls keep it up. u've made this perv very happy indeed! now, moving from praise to other thoughts, things don't have to go EXACTLY the same as the first time around, just similar enough for everyone who exists in the future version1 to also exist in version2. the pre-existing couples must stay the same to preserve the next generation. but the rest is free to variation as i see it. i can't see snape getting outa brewing that potion, although would thathavbeen great. he has to SEEM a loyal servant long enough to align himself with albus and become a spy to play his part in the future. does mione hav to die? sev certainly can't, that would bugger up everything.(wouldnt it?) would mione's absence from harry's life change things for the worse or can some one effectively fill her place? like an idiot i've just noticed the angst warning? is bittersweet too much to hope for? can a story be full of angst and have a happy ending yet still b and angsty story? how bout a shakespearian tragic love? (though i do think if any1 deserves a lil love/happiness it's snape...but life isn't fair) however stories r better than life. (and sometimes fics help fix the unfairness of certain books) i hope you dont have this all figured out in your head, and r open to a little influence. sry 4 makin ya read all of this,got carried away, it's a compliment. update asap. >;)
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 14, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Phoneix on October 13, 2007
    You are so amazing! The plot is quite intriguing and I love Severus. He is just how I imagined an angsty slytherin being.

    Please update more soon!!!
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 13, 2007
    Both excellent updates! (of course!) Absolutely excellent chapters. LOVED THEM!
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  • From myangeldraco on October 13, 2007
    wow that was one quick update!!!!! up they all come that fast!!! Your story is becoming really intriguing and I just can't wait for more!!!xx
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  • From myangeldraco on October 13, 2007
    Oh my god!!! I want to more!!! I love this fic!!! Please update as soon as you can, Oh and I'm feeling a lot better today xxxx
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  • From Madietta on October 13, 2007
    I like the way you are developing this story. Just a little tip regarding your writing style - the only thing that sort of disturbs me is your switching between tenses, often in the middle of a sentence. You should either stick to the past or present tense, alternating like that is disrupting the flow of your writing.
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