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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei
  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 18, 2007
    mmm hmmm...Chapter 16's sex scene..so fucking hot... : )

    Draco getting it on with harry potter's daughter...why does that spell disaster for the future..I can't wrap my head around the implications of that one...

    this story is really wild...I have no idea where it's heading or how it's gonna play out..too many people playing around with time...this can't end well can it?
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  • From reirei on November 18, 2007
    Okay Soft. Its intentionally confusing but know this. DRACO is from the future. He definitely knows Hermione is from the future to stop him from changing history. Anise Potter knows who they both are and is trying to stop Draco. Does that make sense?



    One day, I will make a timeline for this but it will come together. Dont worry.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 18, 2007
    Wow..Chapter 14 was well done. Intense, hot, and sad. Poor Snape. Just had to comment on this one because it was so raw when I was reading it.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 18, 2007
    Anise Potter? What are you playing at? This is getting really bizarre and interesting...but slightly confusing. Draco must recognize Hermione right? doesn't that mess things up?...I never was good at time traveling logic. I'm trusting you to guide me through and tidy these questions that keep swarming in my head as I read this...ok..onto Chapter 13 for me...
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 18, 2007
    Wait a minute..what the hell? Draco? Where did he come from and why did he go back, wouldn't he mess up things up for his own existence as well? This is nuts...you really threw me for a loop on Chapter 11....wow. I'm so feeling the sexual tension between Hermione and Snape, very hot...she's so lucky she gets to be a sexually experienced virgin! Oh if only we could all do that, lol. I'm trying to picture Neville's corny face with Lucius's cool charm seducing Lily and it makes me smile....So it's 4am and I can see this is gonna be a doozy, so I'm taking a break and starting back up again tommorow...night Rei : )


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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 18, 2007
    There's no way I can read this whole story and not review until the end...so I'm gonna review it like I would if you were posting chapters at a time....

    What a awesome premise! It reminds me of Back to the Future only it's sexier of course...and you have me almost, I said almost, converted me to a young Snape/Hermione shipper...I refuse and I mean refuse to ever be a old potions professor Snape/Hermione supporter ::shudders:::. But their interaction in this story is just plain sexy...it has that whole forbidden dark bad boy meets trying-to-stay-pure-girl appeal that makes me a Draco/hermione shipper...so I see what you're saying..although the idea of her getting with Sirius in this story would be sexy..I like the way you've written his character.

    I'm at Chapter 6...the letter from the Ministry to Hermione was a really clever idea...you really are gifted. This is your first fan fiction? Unbelievable...

    the way you've written this story has created some great mental visuals in my head...if only I could draw, I'd create a picture book for you...oh well, all I can offer is my feedback...love it so far....I like how you always give Hermione bit tits in your stories...lol...

    You know the whole time turner thing has always bothered me, its a wonder that such a thing would be duplicated because its so dangerous. Which is why I've always hated the fact that Hermione got one so casually for use in the Azkaban book. But it still makes for a great plot device...Anyway, it's very troubling to think of Harry not being able to remember his own name or the possibility of him disapearing...Lily and Neville's dad? lol..Lily sounds like a little player..lol...

    OK, trying to get through at least 5 more chapters before I go to bed...more later...
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on November 10, 2007
    Awww... so romantic. You are, as always a brilliant writer and I appreciate that you not only updated frequently, but that you also finished brilliantly with a flourish. I am going to miss this story. Thank you so much for a great read!
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  • From myangeldraco on November 10, 2007
    So now Draco's related to Harry and will most likely become realted to Hermione. Is it possible to have a Cissy/Damian story? I loved your description of them! I really liked your epilogue being in the future I think I mentioned that I would like it like that. Please keep up with your writitng it is so entertaining and well done on your finishing of this fantastic fic XXXAXXX
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  • From DB1 on November 10, 2007
    @47 what!? not snape in the epilogue??? awesome story!!

    *DB*
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  • From kalderas on November 09, 2007
    1..2..3, AAAAW! *a roar and applause frm the audience* *breaks out the confetti and clappers* BRAVA! i like you romaticalness. ^^ good god he's so much like snape it's scary. know-it-all, haha, it seems to have stood the test of time. and cissy and sirius are great, perfect mix of potter and malfoy. look at you! following thru and finishing your first fic, and with nearly inhuman speed i might add! you'll b happy to know that you the first author i've been keeping track of for this long and, loyal soul that i am, you won't be losing this reviewer anytime soon. y'know, ya could make a whole new fic branching offa this one, focusing but not solely about the new new gen characters. if the plot bunnies start nipping. not lots do it especially with 2 oc's, but i think with the following of this fic ya might b able to pull it off. but at the moment it's too soon; and i'm sure ur all worn out on this fic's side of the brain. just stray ideas floating through. good reviewers feed their author's muse! >;P
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  • From KraeHi on November 09, 2007
    *Sighs* LOVE IT! youre wonderful Rei! *gives kudos*
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  • From ANON - snapeaddiction on November 09, 2007
    EPILOGUE: Where's Snape???
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  • From ANON - Mary6 on November 08, 2007
    I am absolutely loving this story. Please send the Epilogue!!!!!!
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  • From belixz on November 07, 2007
    that was so fucking awsum i loved it i carnt wait for your other stors to be compelted anyway brill fic see u soon
    belixz
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  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    That was so sweet how you thanked me in the end chapter!!!, now I really do feel guilty for not checking the updates, but 12 hour shifts really do take it out of you honest!! I am off ill today and was really happy and sad at the same time to see I could read some more of this fantastic story and that it was complete. I loved the ending I hope you put Hermione's and Snape's child in the epilogue, maybe in the future then we can see Draco and Anise's future outside of her being an Hogwarts student!! anyway whatever you do I'm sure it'll be fantastic. Just to let you know I started reading this story at a really depressing time of my life and you really helped me get over a lot of bad emotions and start to see things more positive again and I just want to say a huge thank you and I really honestly mean thatxx Please don't take too long with the epilogue!! maybe weekend I'm off then ;) xax
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