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Reviews for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

By : reirei
  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    Chapter 45 - Am I psychic?! I'm so happy that Anise used the Loa to bring Draco back to life and that he repelled it!!!! now to get them together!!! on to the end chapter now.....
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  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    chapter 43 was as you said really sad I thought maybe that the loa would go out of Anise's body in to Draco's I've never read a story were Draco died :(
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  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    I've just read chapter 42. Lucius is a bastard!!!!! I cannot believe he killed Draco, I'm wondering what effects the loa will have on Anise now and how everything will turn out for everyone. I've missed the updates on this, I've been on 12 hour shifts the last couple of days so have only managed to read the updates on hogwarts malestrom before I am needing to go to sleep!!! so sorry about that xax
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  • From DarqueHart on November 07, 2007
    I hope you continue writing. The story you created is very good, but unfortunately you didn't go to the small bother of having someone beta it for you. There weren't that many mistakes, but had those been corrected I could have rated this at 5. Consistent updates are just as welcome as fast ones, correct spelling and grammar are priceless!
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  • From Carine on November 07, 2007
    Hi ReiRei,
    CONGRATULATIONS!!!(reader pays out a round of butterbeer to the great author)So you have finished your first story.(firework display+fanfares in the background)I must tell you that it is one of the best stories I've ever read.(it is in competition for the first place in my top ten list together with "Hogwarts Malestrom",maybe you know the author of this one.grinning)
    Ahem!(reader's blushing)I've got a great favour to ask of you(only if you're interested)You know I've already thought a long time about writing my own story,but my problem is that though I am polyglot (German,English,French,Latin and of course Luxembourgish)I do not think I will be able to devellop my own plot into a coherent story in a language that is not my native one.When I read your story,I directly thought that maybe you would be ineterested in international "fame".I am member of a German Rickman-Snape fan-site and I would like to ask you to give me the honour of translating your great story into German.Naturally you would get full credit of the story as I would only be the translater.You also would get your own specially designed disclaimer.(something like:The Harry Potter Universe has been created by JKR...
    No money is made of this.The plot and the unrecognized characters belong to the amazing fanfiction author ReiRei.I-Sureves Epans- am just providing the translation to this wonderful story...)Naturally I would also translate the reviews (and there are busy reviewers on this site)for you.If by any means you would be interested and need further information,please contact me by sending an email to nezifr@pt.lu LOL Sureves Epans PS:I can't wait for the epilogue to come...
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  • From ANON - LuvSeverus on November 07, 2007
    Oops, sorry I just read your response to a review that basically said the same as mine... It's just a bit confusing to read everything in past and then read a sentence like this in present. "Hermione struggles to breathe regularly as Severus disengages them from each other. He pulls down her skirt almost tenderly and then closes his robes, tightening them." Maybe if you're trying to convey a specific character's thoughts you could try using either quotation marks or better yet italics. But still good job and great story, I can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - LuvSeverus on November 07, 2007
    I really like this story from what I've read so far. The only thing is that you change tenses- from past to present sometimes in the same sentence. But it's great how you integrated your story with the plot of the Deathly Hallows. Young Severus is super hot too. Good job!

    -LuvSeverus
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on November 07, 2007
    I weep for you... you must be heartbroken to be finished, and if you aren't, I can guarentee you that I am. I am going to miss this story alot!!!!
    Very, very, very good job. I wonder why you don't write professionally. Your ideas were refreshingly brilliant.
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on November 07, 2007
    I... I... think I hate you. *sniff, sniff*

    I loved... nay, nay... LOVE Draco and you--you-- YOU KILLED HIM! If it weren't for the fact that you were such a brilliant writer and your story is addicting and your characters in tact, I would sooooo be angry at you! However, you are too interesting for me to be angry at for long, so I am going to get over it and read more.
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  • From strangerdanger89 on November 06, 2007
    I am sad that the story is over, but I am happy with the ending. I also have fallen in love with malestrom, in the Draco/Hermione section. I can't wait to see what you dole out next time.

    You should put a epilogue about Hermione and them having the baby!
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  • From ANON - Rosedown on November 06, 2007
    I'm not sure I can keep reading this story. You are switching verb tenses! Choose one: use present tense or past tense. When you use both it gives your readers a headache. I would recommend sticking to past tense. It is really difficult to write in present tense narratively. This isn't a flame; the story is good; I just can't follow it because of the verb confusion. Work it out and the story will be 100% better.
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  • From shelagh on November 06, 2007
    Execellent work I have throughly enjoyed this fic. I look forward to many more stories from you.
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  • From ANON - Ryuuko Kijo on November 06, 2007
    Ok- you asked...receive
    I can admit I didn't expect the death. However like all the others following this story I have
    been waiting for you to update. Thankfully you gift your readers with quick updates. It has
    been a pleasure reading as you spin your tale.
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  • From KraeHi on November 06, 2007
    Yay! Draco lives! *does a little dance* Loves to you Rei!
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  • From ANON - johanna3030 on November 06, 2007
    I was up until 2 am last night reading every bit of story that you had posted. Imagine my surprise at waking up today to find the story completed. Thanks for all the hard work you put into this story. I enjoyed the plot immensely. Have a lovely day!!
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