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Reviews for Draco's Dad

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LadyVoldemort87 on January 20, 2008
    oh my god i love Lucius how gorgeous is he! loved this fic, i only wish i was hermione! x
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From angelprince on December 12, 2007
    I love your twisted little mind. Very Stiflers Mum. Happy Birtday, indeed. Now would that be smooth peanut butter or the extra crunchy kind.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on November 15, 2007
    that was great!! do you think you could write more to it? would love to know what comes of their night...
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  • From LunaRiddle on November 12, 2007
    That was completely perfect! Gotta love a great Hermione and Lucius one-shot....which could turn into more if wanted.

    By the way, Happy Birthday, whenever it was :D
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  • From ANON - Jocelyn25 on November 10, 2007
    There is only one thing i can say:

    WAY TO GO :)))

    Fantastic as usual

    Jocy
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  • From cynsharry on November 02, 2007
    very nice
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  • From Jen618 on October 31, 2007
    Oh that was wonderful! The ending, especially. Are you sure you don't want to write more???
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  • From ANON - Miss.Biitchh on October 30, 2007
    thats the best FF ive red in ages .. and the funniest update asap if u do update x
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  • From SiriuslyDistracted on October 28, 2007
    This was great!! I loved sexy Lucius. That and the stiflers mom comment at the end had me laughing so hard i my cat started got scared. and Happy b-day (belated!!)
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  • From wishywashy on October 14, 2007
    i loved this. tell me you will write a sequel. i think it deserves one.
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  • From dynonugget on October 13, 2007
    Great story. Very enjoyable! If you get your birthday wish, you're a very lucky lady!!
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on October 13, 2007
    Happy Birthday To you!!! This was An awesome one shot!!! Loved every second of it!!!
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  • From Utopia on October 13, 2007
    BRILLIANT WRITING! I did think initially along the lines of American Pie, but this was far better! (Not that it would take much to be a bit better than that film, but this was MANY times better).

    Hermione Stumbling upon the little sanctuary was rather expected; most people presume she isn't one for sex, drugs and rock and roll parties. however, it wasn't obvious that she was looking for company, just somewhere quiet to rest her feet.

    Lucius's opening words, asking if she was lost, suggests that others have stumbled upon his solitude at some point.

    One thing I did love, and its probably the most insignificant detail - but Hermione's knickers matched her dress! I'd have just had some plain white ones on under it, rather than bothering to go out and match the colour to the outer garments!

    The sex was believable and didn't leave the reader with any misconceptions - it was noting more than sex, not making love, no emotions involved, just a meaningless f**k.

    The morning after was amusing, I'd love to have seen Draco's face as he walked in to find his Dad with scratches down his back and a bed partner he'd have NEVER expected! I think Harry and Ginny had enough alcohol clouding their brains - the reaction was rather passive. (Thank Goodness Ron didn't witness it! He's carried a torch larger than the one at the Olympics for years!)

    Her in his shirt was also a nice touch - evidently he was gentleman enough to let her sleep in something more comfortable; but there is something about wearing your boyfriends shirt that makes them really happy - a sign of ownership or something caveman!

    10/10, a nice little one shot - and I don't think it could realistically be continued without spoiling the spontaneous nature of the one shot.

    Oh, and Happy Birthday!
    MANY HAPPY RETURNS!
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  • From Pumkin on October 13, 2007
    always enjoy a story like that. short sweet and too the point. hope you write more. happy birthday.
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