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Reviews for Draco's Dad

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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 13, 2007
    Great story! Great job!
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  • From ShilohDarke on October 13, 2007
    I loved it. Awesome, tasty... and well written.... Sad it didn't last longer, but nice anyway!


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  • From ANON - belinda samuel on October 13, 2007
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY Chicken!!!! Another fab and fun story from you. I know you need to sleep but I love it when you write so much. We haven't spoken in a while (remember i'm the teacher and we were talking about the brilliance of your son) hope all is well. Got my ticket for London the other day Yah!! Keep churning out these fab stories 'cause I'll always be reading them. Sorry I haven't reviewed in ages but will from now on. Have a wonderful Birthday, wish I could give you Lucius as a pressie (sorry I won't share Severus with anyone).
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  • From ffpoisongirl on October 13, 2007
    Happy birthday! If you get your birthday wish, let me know where to get my own for January.

    I'll admit, I was a little leery when I read the title; I've read another Hermione/Lucius story with the same title, only it was based off of that song, Stacey's Mom. Needless to say, I didn't care for it.

    Your story, on the other hand, worked quite well. It was well-written, and everyone seemed reasonably in-character (though the thought of Lucius allowing a night of debauchery in his manor is unlikely, I can see him doing it for Draco).
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 13, 2007
    Chapter 1 One-shot: Now THIS was a hot Lucius tale. Realistic, lovely descriptions of the surroundings, the study, and...woo-hoo, Lucius' clothing. I was ready to jump his bones myself. Hermione was dressed and then undressed beautifully, too. I loved their relaxed conversation and how you moved them from polite talking into intense, erotic f**king that was hotter than the Sahara in June. You just do such delectable smut. A true talent. This Lucius was so soignee and cultured and then you gave him bare feet. Be still my heart. Hermione was sooo lucky to have stumbled into the Slytherin's lair and been confident enough to entice him into showing her his vaunted expertise at sex. And did he ever! Great job!!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on October 13, 2007
    First and foremost--HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Now to the story--were you planning on making this a oneshot? I hope not. It's a great start. Good luck and keep up the excellent work.
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  • From sirsevchick on October 13, 2007
    Happy Birthday to you! As with all of your fics....wonderfully hot :)
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  • From ozarkmoon on October 12, 2007
    Just delicious! Happy Birthday to you! x4. And if anyone truly deserves the L/S sandwich, it is you -- but only if you promise to write about it!
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  • From SygnusSwan on October 12, 2007
    Happy Birthday to you! Wow! Excellent bday gift to give yourself!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2007
    I love reading your stories, always hot!!!

    Oh, and have a Happy Birthday!!!
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  • From LeahLove08 on October 12, 2007
    I LOVE IT! Great job! And Happy Birthday! I hope you get what you want! :D

    Oh, thing about your writing I noticed... When a character is talking to someone there has to be a comma, for example: "Hermione by the lake!" Harry yelled. Harry is talking about Hermione in that sentence, but if I add a comma: "Hermione, by the lake!" Harry yelled. Now Harry is talking to Hermione. Without the comma the whole meaning of the sentence changes. I noticed that when you have someone talking to someone else, you don't have the comma, so grammatically, they are talking about them, not to them. I hope that made sense. Anyway, I can't wait to read more from you!
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on October 12, 2007
    And what a happy birthday!
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