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By : Severusluciusallthebadboys
  • From scotsgirl on October 31, 2007
    oh now are you going allow her to escape and for Lucius to go after her, looking forward to the next update
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  • From DB1 on October 29, 2007
    @6 great chapter, update soon

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  • From catysmom1028 on October 29, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on October 29, 2007
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From DB1 on October 28, 2007
    @5 update update update update update update!!!!!

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  • From wishyouwere on October 27, 2007
    Since you asked, here are a few possibilities that came to mind...
    1. The way Lucius is torturing Hermione could play out along the same stream for the next couple of chapters, and then when he is called upon to torture another woman, he could find that he can't 'perform' - this could be because he is secretly attracted to her, and after having her, no one else will do.
    2. Or, we can discover that Severus was in the background of this, and trying to figure out a way to save her life, cast a form of Imperio curse on her.
    3. Or, this can be a nightmare
    4. Or, she is rescued and Obliviated, only to discover that she is pregnant with no memory of it - when Lucius discovers her condition, it triggers some deep soul searching on his part
    Just some thoughts - I never volunteer ideas unless they are solicited. I generally like stories that end on a positive note, but also appreciate that not all stories can end that way, and I feel like yours may be traveling down that path. Keep up the great writing!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 27, 2007
    Another great chapter. I think since he has used her this much already, then she should be put back into a cell to rest for a few days. After that she could either be used some more by him or someone could try to help her escape. If she manages to escape then she would constantly be thinking of Lucius and want to try and find him, causing her to be captured once more. That would mean more punsihment because she had left. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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  • From DB1 on October 26, 2007
    @4 aww i want more!!!! update soon

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  • From catysmom1028 on October 24, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on October 23, 2007
    This was great. I hope that there is at least one more chapter left. I would like to see what else Lucius has planned for her. Please update again soon.
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  • From DB1 on October 15, 2007
    @3 awesome story. Add more!!!!

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  • From Davima on October 14, 2007
    It's perfect. I'm looking forward to next chapter. Please update soon.
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