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Reviews for The Nothing I've Become (Areas of Expertise II)

By : SickPuppy
  • From mikaela717 on January 08, 2008
    *Tear* How sad :( Update soon!
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  • From Jilliane on January 08, 2008
    Well.....erm....."Sweet Puppy"....at the risk of sounding like I'm just tagging along after you in sycophantic awe.....

    This chapter made me cry.....I don't know who to feel sorrier for, Severus or Harry. The ending to this chapter was bittersweet and moving, well written. I don't want this story to end, I'm afraid of what may be coming next, but at the same time, can't wait to see what you do with the story and how you write it.
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  • From KaeXLi on January 07, 2008
    cries* yay this story is kick ass
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  • From KaeXLi on January 06, 2008
    wow i love your stuff
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  • From Jilliane on January 06, 2008

    Of course the answer is "tiara"! D'oh! Only an idiot such as myself would completely mis-read and then misunderstand what you wrote.

    *struggles to maintain dignity after all the whinging she did*



    And the plot thickens.

    I must applaud you on the way you've taken the canon story and meshed it in with your own original work. Very clever and intriguing; just when you're going along to canon and I think I know where you're headed, you veer off the beaten path seamlessly and I find myself avidly devouring your original work. Just when I think I've seen the light as to where that will lead, I realise I'm back in the canon story. The "key point" here is "seamlessly", and that's the beauty of it. You've woven it all together into one smooth and silky story that is rich in detail, subtle hints and clues, and is a luxury to read.

    And that, IS magic.


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  • From mikaela717 on January 06, 2008
    Ah...:) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - magic on January 06, 2008
    Poor Harry! That's not a really great thing to see. the answer to the riddle is tiara. I really like this story. Please continue your great work.
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  • From Jilliane on January 06, 2008
    Alright, YOU!!!! I've been sitting here all day trying to suss out this chuffin' riddle!!! A RIDDLE!!! For the love of God woman, haven't you tortured us ENOUGH?!?!?

    And I don't know who you think you're fooling; we all KNOW Ron is just going to trot back to Hermione and ask HER to figure it out! Grrrrrrr!

    Freaking riddle frustration aside....nice chapter! (hawhaw!)

    Seriously, I felt so bad for Severus, made to grovel....and then made to submit to more Ewww!ScalyCockSmut, and just after having had Harry after so long!!! And poor Harry having to watch it in his head!! THAT'S an afterglow killer if there ever was! Nice evocative writing for the vomiting by the way; I had no trouble whatsoever visualising THAT thank you very little! (Bleargh!) Erm....anyway...again, great writing both in style and in sustenance, and as it's Snarry and they're back together, the subject isn't bad either! (Minus, of course, the Ewww!ScalyCockSmut) Update soon, please, and relieve us from the misery of that blasted!riddle, and all your "key points"!

    Here's a "key point" for you-----> You're driving me crazy! Now update!!
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  • From Tinabedina on January 05, 2008
    Great chapter! Is Harry pregnant again?
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  • From mikaela717 on January 05, 2008
    Is it...The letter 'a'?

    Btw, that was very squicky, and poor Harry, having to witness it (I think?) Ugh!

    Update soon!!
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  • From Jilliane on January 04, 2008
    Excellent chapter! I don't really care for the grovelling, subservient Severus, but of course I understand why he has to be written that way in relation to Voldemort, and you wrote it very well indeed. Makes me subconciously brace myself to be squicked again in the next chapter, as we all know how "fond" of Severus Voldemort is......(EwwwwwShudder!!) I like it that you're portraying Ron as being rather brave here (going to get Severus, rushing into the room to help even though he's uncomfortable about it) instead of the usual dense, unreasonable, goofball sidekick he's frequently portrayed as, and I think it's a nice touch to reward him with kisses from Hermione (at least he's getting something! Poor Ron....never gets laid!) As always, your writing only makes me crave more, so, update soon please!! (Or I'll find that friend of yours and make her start nagging you again!)
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  • From KaeXLi on January 04, 2008
    yay happy update!!!
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  • From Tinabedina on January 03, 2008
    Great chapter!
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  • From mikaela717 on January 03, 2008
    Oh, poor Sev...Update again soon!!
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  • From mikaela717 on January 02, 2008
    Still haven't found out what's wrong with him...Have we? Or maybe I just completely missed it...Hmmm...That's entirely possible. Anyway, awesome chappie, update again soon!!

    P.S. I don't think anyone is going to complain that that chapter was almost pure smut, what do you reckon? :)
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