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Reviews for The Nothing I've Become (Areas of Expertise II)

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jilliane on January 02, 2008

    Don't. You. DARE. touch the smut!!!! STAY AWAY FROM THE SMUT!!! It's HOT and horny, needful Snarry goodness and if you change a thing, I swear I'll never review again! I mean it!!

    Seriously, it doesn't need to be tweaked or edited or anything. It's perfect. I loved Harry's helpless abandon, Hermione's embarassment, and Ron's quick escape to find help. Yay Ron!! And then of course, theres the pause.... "You ask so nicely."... Brilliant!!! I loved it all, as fabulous as I've come to expect from you. Promise you'll never stop writing, and I promise to never stop reading.

    Oh yeah...and btw....give your friend a big thanks for nagging you into updating, won't you!
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  • From KaeXLi on January 01, 2008
    ummm is he in heat? just a wild guess cant wait update please
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  • From zxna21 on December 28, 2007
    OMG!! It is the effects of the bonding, wether or not it worked. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please update soon. thanks
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  • From knowingdivine on December 27, 2007
    Is he feeling Snape's feelings?? Or Ron and Hermy's??
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  • From Jilliane on December 25, 2007
    Puppy, Puppy, Puppy...you and your little cliffie thingies......you revel in torturing your readers, don't you? I can picture you now, sitting in the corner.... snickering evilly, dreaming up new ways to drive us all insane. Bad Puppy!!! *searches for newspaper*

    Seriously, frustration aside, another great chapter to set us all wondering. I have no idea what's happening to Harry. Severus is dreaming of shagging him silly and their minds are connected? Harry's got his memory back and his lust for Sev is such that he cannot help wantonly bucking his hips like mad? He's faking a convulsion to get shot of Ron and Hermione because their snogging has made him horny as hell and he can't wait to find a quiet corner and wank? All I can say (with the utmost love and snark) is, go on then, take your sweet time updating and keep me in suspense for a REALLY long time, because you know how much an anally retentive personality such as myself simply LUUURRRRVES being driven mad. I adore it! Don't update soon! Let me go completely round the bend! *goes off to tear out own hair and pout*
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  • From mikaela717 on December 24, 2007
    For once, I've got no idea!! *Sad* Looking forward to the next chapter soooooooooo....

    UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From DarkGothic on December 24, 2007
    withdrawal? lol XD
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  • From eclipsingshadows on December 24, 2007
    hmm...could it be the bond needs to be consumated? or is it the lack of distance between the two has taxed the bond? or is he preggers again?
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  • From mikaela717 on December 21, 2007
    YAY!! Another update in such a short time! Wooooo hooooo!! Update soon!
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  • From Jilliane on December 20, 2007
    Aha! Thank you for making the previous chapter clear, and for finally sating my curiosity, and for the dedication That's so sweet!

    That was different and unexpected, and I admit that I didn't understand part of it at first. I didn't quite get what the crystals were, although I did get that the black lake Harry was floating on represented Severus, and that the whole thing represented some sort of breakthrough into Harry's memories. I like it that it was Severus telling him to fight, I like it that they have a psychic connection. This was a great use of metaphor, and added an intriguing twist to the story. I found it a bit frustrating at first, the previous chapter, in the context of a stand alone chapter, but taken as a whole, with this chapter and in the context of the whole story, it was good. I like that you present things from both Harry and Severus's sides; I think a lot of authors tend to forget that they already know the story, and so it's easy for them to overlook things that readers may need explained, but you justify everything you do, and that makes a whole story for the reader. Good job! I can't wait to see what comes next for Harry and Severus.
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  • From mikaela717 on December 19, 2007
    OH! I like, I like! Update soon!!
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  • From mikaela717 on December 06, 2007
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMGGGG!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!! Lol...You dedicated a chapter to me =D *sigh* happiness...OH yeah...And Harry remembered!! Harry remembered...Harry remembered!! *dances* I call it...The Harry Remembered Dance...It involves much clapping and macarena-type moves (with stomping of feet and yee ha's tooooo!!!)

    Anyway, a little bit hypo...Just a little...Heh...You've made my day!!!

    Update soon!! Mixed_up is waiting with bated breath....
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  • From knowingdivine on December 05, 2007
    Yay!!!!! Harry knows and Severus has gotten to see him!!! You have just made me very happy my dear.
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  • From Jilliane on December 05, 2007
    Yay! Severus is alive!!
    Yay!! Harry couldn't kill him!!
    YAY!!! Harry finally remembers!!!
    YAY!!!! For great writers like you, Puppy Dear!

    I'm so glad Harry couldn't do it, (even if I didn't really think he would in the first place) and I'm thrilled he's started remembering his and Sev's past. Got a bit sniffly at this one, but it's all GOOD! Can't wait to see where they go from here. Update soon, Puppyprettyplease?
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  • From KaeXLi on December 04, 2007
    oh thank god snapes not dead
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