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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From SilkySweetSatin on January 09, 2008
    It seems my dear I just cannot get enough of your stories. You are such a great writer and I will be waiting for more of R/H stories. Hel all that you couple her with are great but they just seem to be my favorite at the moment. Thak you once again for allowing us to read your stories. It seems we cannot get enough!!! Luv Sin!!!!!!!
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  • From Utopia on January 09, 2008
    Chappie 2

    The knotting is a common thing with canines. Foxes are the most amusing (David Attenborough got some good stuff!) the female foxes don't tend to approve of their male being attached to them for a long period of time; and they try to carry on with their business. Attenborough got footage of a mated pair fighting over some foraged scraps, while he was still inside her!

    Hermione's reaction to Lupin's words was well written, but Lupin (almost bloody wrote Lucius then!) realising she was ashamed of being a woman and having baser urges was FANTASTIC; he knows her insecurities and doesn't want them to be a problem. Hermione had better stay clear of paperback romance novels! Andy loves it when I read one... he can monopolise the literature fantasy while its still in my head! He has his moments when he's a clever cookie!

    The ring exchange was cute, but I wonder where/who the rings came from! Hermione's is so ornate and expensive that I doubt Remus could afford it! And his was of really heavy gold, something Hermione probably wouldn't have been able to buy either! *ponders*
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  • From Utopia on January 09, 2008
    Oi Missus! Get to the back of the queue for the 'pets'! I most certainly am the holder of Lucius's leash! Why do you need all three? Can't you just be happy with one of them? Isn't Snape enough for you?! *prepares to argue case for keeping Lucius chained to my headboard*. (lol)

    And on a more serious note: This was brilliant (chapter 1), I like your Remus, I can FEEL the sexual tension wafting off the screen in front of me! I'd never thought of Remus as alpha, he's so calm and controlled - but perhaps that control stems from being alpha in the first place? I can understand exactly what you're trying to get across with the first chapter!

    Though, his words have me puzzled - with the 'lover of men' comment especially. If Remus is reluctant to let himself go in passion, does that mean he NEVER has, and is therefore a virgin? (just puzzled)
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  • From bugaboo on December 29, 2007
    I loved reading your alternate universe story. It was very well writen. Your plotting was excellent. I liked that Remus, Fred, Serius, and many other great characters survive in your fictional universe!
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  • From ANON - kadajclone on December 21, 2007
    lol love the part where he screams F**k
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  • From ANON - dianagodessa on December 20, 2007
    i have to say you captured each character wonderfully. the pregnancy chapter had my laughing a great deal. for a first time writing Lupin you made him very believable & true to character. i also enjoyed your Sirius.
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  • From shanarenea on December 05, 2007
    I really liked this story, and you have def. got the pregnancy thing to a T!! I've had 3 myself and my hubby knew when i said jump he said how high. lol
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  • From LadyJMarie on November 27, 2007
    I have to admit, it was hilarius. love it!
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  • From Gertie on November 17, 2007
    Please, please write more. I have read and reread this story and every time I love it more. The ending is just so charming! I adore this story and beg more like it to satisfy my Moony addiction.
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  • From luvlivsmile on November 11, 2007
    I love this concept!! I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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  • From ANON - Jocelyn25 on November 10, 2007
    After i read Love the Enemy i checked what else you have written and surprise!!!
    I find another one of my fave stories was written by YOU :)
    AWESOME

    You are great! Think about writing professionally and tell me when you published a book. im sure to buy it!

    Jocy
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  • From ANON - Lepusia on November 09, 2007
    I just finished reading the whole story. Loved it XD It was really nice XD
    I am such a RL/HG fan XD
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  • From mikaela717 on November 04, 2007
    AWESOME! Love it...Love it!
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  • From TalonLongbottom on November 01, 2007
    OMFG! I LOVED this story! My aunt told me about it, so natually I had to read it. This story was all she ever talked about. I am going now to read your other stories! Keep writing, never quit!

    ~Stephanie
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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