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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Heidi191976 on October 20, 2007
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I bet Remus will be happy when the baby is born, so that Hermione calms down. Please update again soon.
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  • From LeahLove08 on October 20, 2007
    LOL! Wow. That is great. I would only like Severus too. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - angelbaby on October 20, 2007
    That was so funny. I love how she has them all trained to jump at her command. The cutest Snape ever, being all sweet and giving her foot rubs ('cause she's special). Poor old Remus guess he'l learn quick enough.
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  • From ANON - j on October 20, 2007
    omg just when i thought i couldnt laugh any harder at your story you prove me wrong... i love that hermionie thinks snape is sweet and everyone is jumping for her orders so well. i would luv to see what happens tho if she didnt get the craving food once from remus but any way bravo!!!
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  • From SygnusSwan on October 20, 2007
    LOL! ROFL! I loved the banter! The spoon on thwacking the forehead that was classic! I can't wait to see if Ron got the right food or not.. If Mitchell wasn't fast enough my craving would change or if it got cold I'd get ill looking and smelling it!
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  • From ANON - wishyouwere on October 20, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story, and all of the others that you have written! I am hoping that for the next one we may see another SS/HG - it is my favourite pairing, and you do such a good job with it. I think that I like your writing so much because of the happy endings (I get a little depressed by the 'angsty' fics), and because they are generally well written (I am a professional editor/proof reader so I tend to be pickier than most). Nothing is worse than someone who has found a unique or interesting story line, but ends up mangling it with bas spelling and grammar. I also enjoy knowing that when I log in to the site, I can count on one or two new chapters from you each day. Again, nothing is more annoying than an interesting story that ends up abandoned, or updated so irregularly that it loses its momentum. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 20, 2007
    Lol Poor Remus! That was funny! Please add more soon
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  • From cameowitch on October 20, 2007
    I don't usually read this pairing, I'm glad I took the time to read this one! So, just a couple of more chapters? Do you have an update list? If so, please put me on there never_tempt@yaho.com I can't wait for the rest!
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  • From Sampdoria on October 20, 2007
    Wonderful! I think this is the first wand-point wedding I have ever read, and I enjoyed every minute reading it:-) I do hope though that Hermione will put her hormones to use and scold her reluctant husband quite a bit now that she has got him in her room again. I mean, if he is the cause for eigth men to work together and find him because Hermiones hormones and moodswings are making them batty (and because they love her and wants her to have the man she loves and who made her pregnant), he sure as hell deserves to witness some of those hormones first hand very quickly. She can kiss it all better after:-))
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 20, 2007
    What a wedding. I am glad that Remus is back and that they are married. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 20, 2007
    Oh my god, those poor guys! Please add more soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 20, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - angelbaby on October 20, 2007
    Ha those last two chapters were hilarious. Well done. Although it's a Lupin story , Severus got the best lines, "I have no morals what so ever", "Doesn't matter I feel avenged in many ways". Ha LMAO!! The scene where Severus is bouncing and swinging an upside down Lupin is the best.
    Your really good at funny stuff, I think we have the same sense of humour. Happy writing....
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  • From ANON - HpLover on October 20, 2007
    that was quick but i liked it..its nice... ^ ^ thumbs up moi friend
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  • From ANON - j on October 20, 2007
    this has to be one of the most origional and funnny stories i have seen in forever!!!
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