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Reviews for A Veela's love

By : damnedphoenix156
  • From wyntermist70 on January 21, 2011
    Great story is that the end or will there be more.........I would love to read more if its not the end..
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  • From pontaloon on August 30, 2009
    You make faaar too many seperate paragraphs (some only a sentence long). if you were to combine them together, you would see that there's not a whole lot of narration there.
    On another note, it is cruel and unusual punishment to finish this fic here!
    other then that, that was fucking HOT!!! H.O.T.!!! ...I want more T_T
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  • From Spiceholmes on June 02, 2009
    Really lovely story, you should do a one-shot sequel, Because to tell you the truth would love to know what happened.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2008
    Loved it. very hot and what a great ending! perhaps a sequel?
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  • From on May 07, 2008
    Yes!!!!!!! a Lucius and snape story I just love these!!!!!
    can you email updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com for this story.
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  • From Tyssya on February 08, 2008
    It's the first chapter or it's a one-shot ?? If it's not a one-sho I want th next chapter quickly please !! ^^ !!

    xXx

    Drag'
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  • From mikaela717 on December 08, 2007
    Aw!!! Lucius is so cute when he's desperately craving sex with Sev ^.^
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 20, 2007
    Grea job! But really you can't leave it there. It's awesome. I would like to see what happenes.
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  • From methoslover on October 18, 2007
    I love the imagery of the two together! I would appreciate a seccond chapter, but you left it in a good place. :-)
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  • From MWolf on October 18, 2007
    Nicely done! I love the descriptions!
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  • From Extraho on October 18, 2007
    you evil thing!!!! dont you dare stop there!!!!! you cant end a oneshot with a cliffy1\111111 eagerly waiting for more!!!
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