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By : Dadella
  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2011
    "Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information."
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  • From Danyealle on January 05, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From CatieBrie on December 16, 2010
    I really, honestly expected you to let Harry fall to his death. Maybe that's me screening my intentions onto yours, but that's what I was thinking the whole time. Actually, I was more thinking: "Shit, Kita killed Harry!"

    Anywho, I enjoyed the ending, how you mixed what happened on the tower and what happened afterward together. It was a good read and I have to say I also enjoyed the little snippets of music and the whole use of the album throughout the story.

    I must say I'm looking forward to your newest project (Na na na na na na na~)

    Miss you!

    -Shadoe Dae (Keru)
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  • From stray523 on December 12, 2010
    That was sad and painful and beautiful and................well I'll just say that I really liked it. I'll have to keep my eye out for more of your writing.
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  • From redeyedemon on December 07, 2010
    There's not more... But... But... I'm not okay with that... I want more... That was not a fair ending...

    Please update? Yes? Yes. Good.

    Until then.
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  • From ANON - Edward Malfoy on October 30, 2010
    Hey, is there any way you could email me when you update, I'd really appreciate it, your story is amazing.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 01, 2010
    Soooooo need chapter 7!!! I loved this story the first time and I'm still spellbound!
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  • From kogaluver on May 26, 2010
    This is really good and I'm enjoying it very much. I do have one thing to point out, however. Even though this is what Harry wants, it's still new to him which is why a safe word is in place. However, you had Harry bound and gagged to the point where he would not have been able to utter his safe word even if he had wanted too. In a situation where the slave/sub is both tied and gagged, usually they're given something to hold onto that when dropped will signal that he/she wants to stop. It's not that big a deal, but if you're going to write about BDSM I thought I would point that out. Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.



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  • From ANON - thepretender501 on March 21, 2010
    Hey!! Thanks soo much for searching for that story I have it saved on my documents now :) but I was actually referring to the story by Maya called Your Every Wish. The author had mentioned that she was going to take down all of her fiction and so I saved it on my comp but unfortunately my hard drive crashed and I lost it. I was hoping someone else might have saved some of her fiction as well cause it's no longer on the net. Anywho thanks so much!! I really do appreciate you trying to help me out :) Feel free to delete this 'review' lol, but I left my email just in case you wanted to contact me again.

    Btw I am patiently awaiting the updates to this story and the others so take your time :)
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  • From thepretender501 on March 20, 2010
    I haven't read this one yet and I have to say I am very intrigued... especially as to why Draco is soo popular...
    And poor emo Harry :( I don't like Harry to be unhappy, so I'm looking forward to the fluffy ending lol. Please update soon my dear :)
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  • From undeademopixi on March 19, 2010
    sooo, PLEASE update soon. You were right about the angst! It was making my chest feel tight the whole time I was reading! Very well done. Perhaps be mindful of how you use pronouns. There were a couple of places I had to slow down because I was confused about which "he" was "him" lol.

    xoxo
    Silverkitten
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 19, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 2!!
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  • From OhZombiee on October 03, 2008
    Oh. My. God.
    That was just.... Wow.
    I'm so impressed, that was absolutely amazing.
    Not to mention With Teeth is an incredible album, Nine Inch Nails is the definition of boss.
    You should write a oneshot with The Perfect Drug or Gave Up by NIN
    Both are godly songs.

    Ahhhhhhhh I love it!!

    Less than fuckin 3, for realz.
    ( becuase aff won't let me put a less than symbol ): )
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  • From dragoness615 on July 22, 2008
    Absolutely Amazing. I reviewed before but I wanna review again. This was... where are the words?! *pulls at her hair* You know what? How about we just say... you're bloody brilliant! There we go, I think that should suffice. *tries to smooth hair back down but it pulls a Harry on her* Oh fudge it. So, yeah, I thoroughly enjoyed this story immensely. I'm said to see it end but happy as well. Great job. Love this story. You hear me? Love it. ^.^
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  • From NightLo on July 01, 2008
    Wow...it is good that they share the link, or else Harry really would be gone...and he really loves Draco so much to consider to end his life...just hope they will be there for each other from now on. Thanks for this!
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