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By : Ms_Figg
  • From Ms_Figg on November 11, 2007
    Ryu: I never saw Lily as meek and doe-like. Not in the memory by the lake or in DH when they talked. And she did marry the man who tormented Snape all of his years at Hogwarts. What suddenly made a man who was a toe-rag loveable? Did she do it just to hurt Snape further? Why couldn't she see that Snape was wildly upset down by the lake when he called her Mudblood? Did she have any Empathy? Any care that he was outnumbered and reacting to being targeted by Gryffindors, which was Lily's house? Not only was he stripped in front of a bunch of students by James,who somehow stole his own original spell, but then his best friend tells him she can't take him anymore and cuts him off? And still he becomes a spy for Albus hoping to protect her and when she dies he protects her son at the risk of his own life for years, a son that hates him by the way. The saddest part is Lily probably never gave him another thought after she married James. Yes, I could see Snape following her about like a puppy at Hogwarts, he was obsessed with her and that obsession made his life hell. He got killed for her in the end, too. No, no perfect Lily this story. Not this time. Wow. I don't think I've ever gotten this mad at one of JKR's characters before. lol. Good thing I can write it out. ;)
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  • From ANON - Ryu on November 11, 2007
    and wouldn't she have had better values growing up?- I mean I can see Sev wanting to experiment with sex...I mean with his crappy childhood...looking for some sort of physical contact but I can't really see Lily wanting to actually do that.Curious yes,of course, but I should think that her parents would have also been the type to emphasise the value of a girls virginity. From what I can remember she had pretty nice parents who were pretty pleased about her being a witch...so proud of her. I'm thinking she would have tried not to dissapoint her parents.Just a thought though...BTW:A quick thought... What happened to Harrys grandparents? Why are they never mentioned in the books??
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  • From ANON - Ryu on November 11, 2007
    Hmmm...wasn't Lily a bit bitchy there...she always came across as shy and meek and doe-like in the book. Thats why I always liked Hermione more because shes so feisty. THat Lily was just a tad OOC. And Sev followed her around like a puppy O_o...this story makes it sound as if Lily actually only ever used Sev for her own means...
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on November 11, 2007
    omg...noooooooooooo...i am here in tears...please fix this...pleaase
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  • From angelnomiko on November 11, 2007
    man .. poor sev .. what is it going to take mione to do to get him back ... please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - MND on November 11, 2007
    This could be interesting.. as long as you don't make them be stupid for too long... XD


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  • From ANON - McHell on November 11, 2007
    Hmmm... I want him to give in. Of course he will. But at the same time, Hermione was pretty immature to act the way she did. She's young and probably felt some vindication. *sigh* Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - phistolemon on November 11, 2007
    *facepalm* damn, hermione.
    this is exactly what I thought would happen.
    well, imo he had every right to react the way he did now,
    though his view on his future is really sad.
    everyone just uses him, eh? sigh. looks like it.. but I hope hermione -somehow- manages
    to get back to him and prove him that he's more worth than that :
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  • From ANON - MND on November 11, 2007
    Yes you Build up a lot of Snape sympathy with this last chapters XD XD XD (Just don't push it JAJAJA) Dumb is one of the few words I have for lily now in my mind... the good thing is, that Hermione, being the way she is, will sweep away her memory in merely seconds XD. If Snape can't see how much better is Hermione for him, How she wouldn't play with him, then he's dumb too XD. Moving along nicely


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  • From Ms_Figg on November 11, 2007
    septentrion: You know, some writers write from what they know, but I can't say I know this for sure, but I can tell you about one situation that I remember way back when. This was a long time ago. I think the early '70's. Disco Lady was the hot song of the moment and I don't think I was more than 13 or 14. I lived in a mixed neighborhood and there was this girl named Louise, an Italian girl, beautiful with wild black hair, a big nose and a big butt who used to dance to that song and all the boys were just plain in love with her. I remember myself, Louise and two other girls being alone with this boy named Patrick, and Louise made him show us his "wand." I was so uncomfortable, I left. You could tell he didn't want to do it, but because Louise asked him, he did. Later I heard Louise made Patrick "hump" her and the other girls. That's what we called it then. I don't know if penetration was involved because I didn't ask, but he had to have his pants down at least. So yeah, girls can be like that. I still remember the last names of everyone too, but won't use them. We're all grown up now. But some things stick with you.

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  • From septentrion on November 11, 2007
    Chapter 31: I'm not bothered by underage sex under those circumstances. They were both teenagers who experimented. Lily's attitude, though, bothered me. I'm not sure a 14 year old girl would have such a detached attitude about sex, yet I admit not to know every teenage girl in the world, and I might be surprised.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2007
    lily was a manipulative bitch
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2007
    thank goodness for competition!!!
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  • From Jadewitch on November 11, 2007
    I'm glad this is not over now that Snape is back to human- it seems to just be getting started! I think Hermione should forgive Snape- but not right away. He did apologize after all. She better not start playing games with that Edgar boy, he's nice enough but if she tries to do that it won't help her with Snape. For now it just looks like she's trying to figure things out, which is good. And poor Severus- what a horrible thing for Lily to do to him! Ouch- I mean, she obviously knows he has feelings for her, or at least she knows she can manipulate him easily, and she uses him just as an "experiment", then she expects him to keep everything secret- what a selfish little brat. I know some of it can be chalked up to being immature, young and stupid, but still- she obviously did not deserve Severus's devotion. Hopefully he and Hermione can make things right and Snape can break this sad cycle of his.
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 10, 2007
    Great chapter - it was quite interesting to see how they Snape and Lily interacted. :D
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