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Reviews for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From jraskin on November 10, 2007
    forgive him!don't let her be like lily, don't let her use him!Please update soon!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 10, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From CarlaRush on November 10, 2007
    Of course she needs to forgive him! Who else will they wind up together? Great story.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 10, 2007
    Penance! Penance! Potion Master special Penance! Hermione-style ...
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  • From ivorycameo on November 10, 2007
    Ooh, I like the AU thing with Lily... it sounds totally plausible. And it's good that Snape is starting to realize that Hermione is important and wonderful and not too annoyingly Gryffindorish hehe.
    It would be awesome if he got a taste of jealousy though... maybe later on? I do like me some good old jealousy.
    Love-love-LOVING this story.
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 09, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From SorceressFujin on November 09, 2007
    hehehe, excellent! :D
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 09, 2007
    F*&@ the boxers ... I was hoping for commando ;)
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 09, 2007
    Snape is really going to need some good luck. Doesn't keep any of that Felix Felicis around does he?
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  • From ANON - phistolemon on November 09, 2007
    chapter 25 - 28 were simply brilliant.
    I loved every tiny bit you wrote. from the DADA lessons to how hermione pwnd
    severus at the lake, got detention and told him what was really necessary to be said about
    him and their situation. she had every right to tell him what an idiot he was.
    I understand why he dumped her, but it wasn't nice nevertheless. he didn't really give
    her a chance to adapt to anything. however, I think you portrayed both characters' feelings
    very well. every decision they made, everything they did, thought and how they acted especially
    since the last 4 chapters is very well thought through.

    not that they aren't throught through usually ;) am just saying that I really enjoy
    the latest chapters with more gusto than usually. I'm also pleased to see how you work this
    story out further and further. I thought, after vashti's death you'd wrap the story up and
    end it, but you do more than that (adding the snape/lily bit, cool!). very nice :)

    now I'm really curious how the man is going to apologize.
    I don't think hermione will be an easy one *snickers*
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  • From ANON - MND on November 09, 2007
    Wonderfull wonderfull, this story is only getting better. Seeing Snape Apollogize is something I've been waiting for ... well I'm not going to say long time.. but since a few chapters ago. I'm really enjoying this story.


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  • From ANON - Elika on November 09, 2007
    ahh~~ good for hermione to tell off snape..too bad that he thought it would be easy to sleep with her again ^^
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  • From ANON - gowvan on November 09, 2007
    Oh, Bravo Hermione. Bravo.
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  • From Julls on November 09, 2007
    Go Hermione! She is great^^ Finally she puts him in his place.
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 08, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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