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Reviews for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Ms_Figg on November 05, 2007
    Aragon: Thanks hon. I missed that completely. I write too fast and suck at math. lol ***
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  • From ANON - Aragon on November 05, 2007
    Mhhh, I wondered how you'd keep Severus alive - or rather re-animate him again ^_^ - after Vashti's death didn't seem to be the solution and simply made them weaker vampires... And I LOVED that he stayed true to his convictions and was ready to end it on his terms! The way you wrote it I'd even have accepted his death as sad but fitting. But this twist is of course less tragic and more fulfilling, Hermione especially will prefer this outcome ^_^ Nice work!
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  • From ANON - Aragon on November 05, 2007
    Hey, just wanted to mention an error you made in chapter 19 re the number of Weasleys before reading on. There are 7 Weasley-children: 6 male, 1 female - so if you have Ron talking about his siblings he'd have 5 brothers and a sister. And with Fred dead post-DH he now has 4 (!) brothers and a sister.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 05, 2007
    You had me going for a minute or 60. I really thought you might have developed some sort of Snape-like mean streak after all this time. ;)

    Thanks for sharing. Pitt

    PS: RUH ROH - who gets to shove Harry and Ron out into the light of day. Mwahahahahah.
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  • From phistolemon on November 05, 2007
    wow, you had me shocked with ch20, but it just couldn't be that you kill him off!
    we had that already and once is definitely one time too much *shudders*
    but oh what a wonderful change of things in ch21. I'm glad he got rewarded for
    his decision :) now I'm curious what life will bring the two of them and how
    ron and harry will get back to their normal lives o_o
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  • From IrishChic20 on November 05, 2007
    Thank the heavens! You didn't kill him! *sighs in relief* More please!
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 05, 2007
    hehe, i was hoping that would happen! ^__^
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  • From IrishChic20 on November 05, 2007
    What?! What d'ya mean "thanks for reading"! You can't leave it there! Please don't leave it there. You don't want to see a grown woman cry, do you?! I promise, I'll throw a tantrum. I'll send my ninja leprechauns after you. Please, please, please write more!
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  • From pittwitch on November 05, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOO!
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  • From Julls on November 05, 2007
    I like your new fic. It is fantastic. You are genius.
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 05, 2007
    Such a great chapter, but so depressing. Keep Severus alive. GRRR :P
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  • From Shalengreh on November 05, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on November 04, 2007
    *cries* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i don't want him to die!!
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  • From LeahLove08 on November 04, 2007
    THAT'S IT?! That can't be it! He can't die! This can't be happening! *cries* This isn't the real ending, right? Please say yes.
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  • From Ms_Figg on November 04, 2007
    Quarter-Blooded Witch: Wouldn't it be wonderful to merge the "brainless yet breathless" men with the ones with minds? But then again, there's something really compelling about the "happy-fo-lucky" easy lover. Whoo! Anyway, I went to your profile and saw that you are interested in doing a bit of betaing. Girlfried, I need you! lol. If you have time that is. I'm not very good at writing other plot-bunnies. I think its just plain selfishness on my part, but I would like to submit completed stories to some moderated sites simply because it's so requested. It isn't vanity, I assure you. It's more of being flattered that other people want me to share these stories in other forums. Unfortunately, the rules of "writing papers" doesn't apply to writing stories, so what I deem acceptable doesn't always meet the standards. Sigh. Making the Dean's List long ago and far away doesn't help a bit here. If you aren't busy and want to do a bit of betaing for me, please email me at truthsolomon@yahoo.com. This is actually an invitation to others who feel like tackling the dragon that's my writing and have a little backgound at it. I think I have over 60 stories that could use a bit of peppering up and I'd appreciate any help in this area. Of course I'd give the proper props. Thanks ya'll.
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