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Reviews for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Queeny on February 11, 2008
    Oh man Snape is so bad! Poor Hermione.
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  • From Queeny on February 11, 2008
    Snape that little bugger! Telling Hermione to "Get a life" and now he's stalking her around the castle.
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  • From Queeny on February 11, 2008
    Yay, Snape is Alive!

    But I figured he'd survive somehow with all those scrummy chapters I still need to read through!
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  • From Queeny on February 10, 2008
    Oh man, Henry Shufton made me laugh a LOT~
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  • From ANON - mari on January 29, 2008
    hahaha nice i really thought u were gonna kill ron at the end haha loved the story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 28, 2008
    Great story, fantastic!!
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 28, 2008
    VIDEO PIMPAGE: Occasionally I make something relatively original available by a donation of choice (Some people send 10 cents. Slicksters. lol. :::shakes head:::) Anyway, I'd like to invite you to take a look at a free low-quality preview of a "Closer" video I made featuring Severus Snape.



    This is quite a graphic video, definitely XXX NC-17 but Hermione isn't "technically" in it, because I have reservations about using Emma Watson clips in such a blatantly sexual video because let's face it, she's so young and it can get rather creepy. But there are women in it. Imagination can work wonders. lol. Besides, the focus is on the MAN.



    Anyway, here's the link. I hope you like the preview. This thing took forever to make. whew.



    DIRECT LINK TO PREVIEW: http://theburningpen.com/clteaser.wvx



    DIRECT LINK TO PAGE: http://www.theburningpen.com/closer.htm



    As I said, the quality of the preview is low so those with dial-up can view it as well. The uncut version is nice and clear. I have a realmedia version for dial-up viewing as well and the complete video is downloadable. Thanks a lot.
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  • From LuluPopalot on January 28, 2008
    Yay!
    Thanks for finishing. I appreciate it. Well done.
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  • From chickaboo on January 26, 2008
    That was a great ending! Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us and I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 26, 2008
    Excellent story! ^___^
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 26, 2008
    Thanks Elen. I'll keep an eye out for that in the future. :) Good looking out and glad you enjoyed the story.
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  • From ElenSila on January 26, 2008
    I really like this story. I hope that you add a couple chapters of conclusion. I do however think I should mention you use the phrase "drank it down" and "swallowed it down" a lot. This phrase is a little akward and odd. I just want to make you aware of the frequencey with which these phrases appear in your writing. Otherwise, I really enjoy your writing and I absolutely adore you plots, they are original and inventive, something not often found in Fan Fiction. Keep up the writing.

    Elen
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 26, 2008
    Updates!! Loved both new chapters, excellent as always! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 26, 2008
    I just read the updates... since the Weasley story had been updated so frequently as well I lost track. I love it. I have no idea how much farther you plan to go with this, an epilogue or yet another twist, but I promise I'll be along for the ride.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 26, 2008
    Brilliant! I love your writing and I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!
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