Click Here!

Reviews for Twice Bitten ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - pittwitch on October 20, 2007
    Clapping hands delightedly. Thanks for sharing, again. Pitt
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2007
    Would you please continue this story?
    Report Review

  • From Ms_Figg on October 20, 2007
    Dragonkisser: Of course Adam and Victor will be in the story. They're vampires. lol. Besides, their names have been slung around on the boards quite a few times in the past few months. I can take a hint. That's probably why this scenario even came to me. lol. But there are a few Adam-haters out here too, so sorry you guys. Well, I've spent the day creating this new vampire hierarchy and I'll give you the basic run down how they are created. Firstly, there are species of Vampires. They're not all the same in origin or power or weaknesses. Keeps them interesting.

    A Mother or Queen Vampire is created by some great evil force or demon, usually because of a vicious lifestyle or a deal of some sort. There are no King Vampires for some reason in this particular species. lol.

    Mother - Creates Primary Vampires. The most intelligent, independent and powerful. Can be influenced but not completely controlled by the Mother.

    Primary - Creates Secondary Vampires. Not as intelligent as Primaries, are controllable by Mothers and Primaries, though the Primary can override the Mother if his/her influence is strong enough

    Secondary - Creates Minions. Least intelligent, most animalistic of vampires, easiest to control but dangerous because they follow animal instinct when it comes to feeding. They cannot create other vampires, only kill.

    There is only one way to kill a Mother which has some interesting results, but if I told ya'll that, you'd figure out the storyline. We can't have that, can we? It will be revealed in the story however. :))

    Report Review

  • From Kristic on October 20, 2007
    And she's back! With a definite juicy tidbit, no less! Sounds promising (though I'm sure you hear that often enough). I look foward to where this one is going . . . and perhaps, an original character or two could make a small appearance . . . *cough* Adam Sweetmeats & Victor *cough*.

    Again, great beginning!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2007
    EWE!!! HAHAHA!!! i personally like stories where they hook up years later (usually makes more sense of them falling for each other), and they have some other experiences to bring to the table, but i can do without the thought of hermione and ron getting it on. am i the only one who sees that that relationship would just be doomed?? a guy with a mommy syndrome marrying a woman who wouldn't want to stay at home? ech.
    Report Review

  • From Ms_Figg on October 20, 2007
    Anon: lol. No, I've already done the epilogue-friendly version of a fan-fic with "A New Beginning." From here on out, when it comes to DH-compliancy I'm writing EWEs or EPILOGUE? WHAT EPILOGUE?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2007
    so far so interesting. please tell me we'll skip the "hermione married ron and had two kids" part of the story. :D
    Report Review

  • From SorceressFujin on October 20, 2007
    Another excellent chapter! :D This story is setting up to be pretty good, I am looking forward to seeing where you go with it. :)
    Report Review

  • From Shalengreh on October 20, 2007
    COOL!!!
    I want more story to read......this sounds good....
    Report Review

  • From ANON - firewall on October 20, 2007
    Yessss, you've done it again. Another amazing chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - LadyBatman on October 20, 2007
    I LOVED IT!!!

    the stories that could come from this if its continued could be fantastic!
    If you ever feel inclined to continue this please do, I would be very pleased...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chatty on October 20, 2007
    hey, i was refreshing your website all these hours and i come here to see you've posted ur story here! but hehe another new story!!!! :) i hope snape comes back faster instead of waiting for 19 years. i also hope that Hermione remains 'intact' and doesnt get married to Ron.
    Report Review

  • From Ms_Figg on October 20, 2007
    CryingCinderella: I'm so sorry about the cliche, but I couldn't freaking resist it. lol. Yeah, Snape as a full vamp is a stretch, and this will be the first time I've written him completely turned. I had him come close in "Love Bites" but of course he was saved from it by Hermione. The opportunity for humor is crazy though, and if I write this . . . there will be quite a bit of it since I'll probably lean towards something light and fun, though with adventure. I don't think I could write a really serious Snape as a Vampire story. Those purported powers of Vampire Seduction are tempting to explore though, heh heh. Thank you for your honest review. I'll be sure to put in something about vampires in the summary as you suggested.
    Report Review

  • From CryingCinderella on October 20, 2007
    -sigh- Not at all a fan of Snape being a vampire. It's improbable. And unlikely. And just makes me sort of squiggle in my chair and say, "Eww." Sorry, you usually do decent work, and I recognized you as an author that I prefer to read from, but not into vampires. Perhaps there should be a bit of a warning in your summary so that us non-vamp Snape lovers can avoid this. It's well written, regardless of subject content, you've always been a decent writer, however I personally cannot do the Snape's a vamp thing. And I didn't find myself particularly moved with the comment about scaring the shit out of the other Death Eater. I could see that line coming a mile down the track, and was hoping for something not so cliche, though giving a character the guts enough to continue to take said shit in the presence of another, that's a gutsy move on your part, so well played, I suppose. I do hope to read more of your works, hopefully less vampire-involved ones. I do hope this stays as a one shot.

    ~CC
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Elika on October 20, 2007
    clever way of bringing back snape...i was pissed that rowling killed him in the book but i hope you do a great job in this one as him being a vampire :P
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!