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Reviews for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

By : reirei
  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2007
    Oh wow...I was way off..lol. I didn't think you could make a entire place disapear..but this is Draco we're talking about : ) That was really cute. I hope Blaise and Ginny end up together, and the whole Neville/Luna thing seems unresolved, I'd like to see Neville knock it out of the park Draco style. Thanks for the Draco/Hermione smut, you know we need our daily fix. Has he told her he loves her yet or does he just plan on going through their relationship communicating his feelings by fucking her into the mattress? I mean I wouldn't mind but maybe Hermione needs more than that...lol
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  • From ANON - Ella on November 15, 2007
    this story is all kinds of awesome..... love all the pairings so far...wouldnt mind snape getting with mariah, he seemed upset that she truely didnt want him so i see some potential there...but really great story, just hanging for an udate
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  • From chelleybelle on November 15, 2007
    yeah! i knew that draco couldn't be a butt! he was so sweet to give her what she wanted, and then what she needed! lol...can't wait for the next update...when will you reveal who the father of the baby is???

    on one hand you want draco to be it because of happily ever after and all that...
    but then, severus needs a baby to love...he would make a good dad...

    then of course, tom riddle before voldy was hot so he would at least produce a beautiful baby and hermione could teach it to be normal...

    or, the fertility potion could have gone haywire and its tripplets and all three men are dads...although that by be a bit out there...or not, lol
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  • From on November 15, 2007
    Did he run off to kill Voldie? hhhmmm, don't make me wait too long!
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  • From princesspeach on November 15, 2007
    That was just mean! I so wish I was insightful enough to see what you are doing here, but you continue to surprise me completely, so I'm not even going to try to guess. I hope you can post again tonight this one is just killing me!
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  • From myangeldraco on November 15, 2007
    Thinking on your last amazing story I think Anon might have a good guess/idea!!

    Anon - I know you've probably read *Time Lost* but if not check it out, it's one of my favourite's...absolutely amazing fic!!!
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  • From myangeldraco on November 15, 2007
    I don't know what to guess probably that he apparated them to or got whatever they needed from india to rid Voldemort of his connection to Harry and Nia but I really don't know. When I read about Draco trying to be the hero but just basically being an egotistical prick I thought maybe he'd done something really stupid and banished them from the world all together but that would probably be the end of the story..so not a very smart guess lol xx by the way I love how Draco looked out for Hermione before she went back to Hogwarts...so sweet!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2007
    its amazing...i cant wait to see what he did

    i keep thinking it involves rewriting the past...but i doubt it lol

    post more soon!
    ~Cait
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  • From chelleybelle on November 15, 2007
    What a horrible cliffhanger!!! Is draco going to redeem himself by taking them all to the healing waters and lure voldemort there? you leave it like he's a butt, but he is our hero, and hermione could never fall in love with a looser...she see's the good in him that nobody else, even himself, can see. so even if you don't use that scenario, you will have him do something heroic and brave...right???
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  • From LaraKatts on November 15, 2007
    Hey, I just started reading your story a couple of days ago and I just have to tell you, it's AMAZING!! I can't believe how many twists and turns this story has taken. Just when I was thinking all hope was lost, it wasn't! And just when you got me beliving that Harry could live, you twisted it so now he can't!! And Snape, omg, SNAPE!! I love how you let him live, it just seems so much more like Snape than the actual book did!! I have no idea what Draco just did, but I can't wait to find out!!

    *starts watching the monitor for the next chaper*
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2007
    No Draco..NO! that was a evil cliffy!

    Who knows what goes through that wicked mind of yours but since you asked for suggestions, here's my 1 cent-

    You could have Draco challenge Voldy to a duel but that seems too simple...ah..maybe have Draco try to challenge Voldemort to a duel only to be intercepted by Snape still disguised as Lestrange. Snape wins the wand from Draco to the pleasure of Voldy and when Voldy asks Lestrange to finish the job, instead of killing Draco he turns and kills Voldy. Scratch that, Snape couldn't kill Voldy with the elder wand because you can't use it unless you're not being selfish right? I have to re-read DH.

    OK another idea, the wand can't be given away or stolen, it has to be won in battle right? If it's possible, Snape should reveal himself to Draco (but that may open another can of worms with the whole Lestrange/Hermione thing). But after all the drama of that revelation, they can reconcile and Draco could let Snape know what's going on. Then Snape and Draco could arrange for an rightful exchange of the wand into Snape's hands by agreeing to a some sort of wand duel. Snape being the older and wiser of the two would naturally win the elder wand from Draco fair and square and be armed to kill Voldy just like he's been craving to do, only this time he will be doing it with the knowledge he will be saving others as well. Then you bring my Draco back to his girl Hermione safe and unharmed while Snape goes to battle with Voldemort in the ultimate duel of duels.

    But Elder wand or not there are still two horocruxes, so this could go a dozen different ways..you've made a devious plot device out of a canon plot device! So then the question is, will the elder want make a bit of difference if Harry and Nia are still alive? Hermione has to work her magic before anyone goes up against Voldy or he'll just keep coming back right? You know that would be interesting too...Draco goes to kill Voldy only to come back to the joke shop to find Voldy popping out of Nia or Harry like some sort of Alien movie..lol.

    Eh, I don't know, I'm rambling now.....whatever you do, just make sure my Draco doesn't die or get disfigured ; )
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  • From chelleybelle on November 15, 2007
    that was a sad chapter...
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  • From chelleybelle on November 15, 2007
    i love snape, and he is only doing what he must to survive...besides that, what man wouldn't take advantage of the situation to get what he has been lusting after?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2007
    oh..that's sad...I hate thinking about Fred. That was the wrongest death in DH by far...but yay for Slytherin/Gryffindor love : ) I like these new OFC's Nia and Mariah, well Nia isn't really new but I like her human form and Mariah sounds like she could be a complex character, we hardly ever see any Slytherin girls depicted outside of Pansy and Millicent....Draco needs to man up, stop doubting, & tell Hermione what's up! Can't wait to see his reaction though when he finds out it was Snape shagging Hermione...I guess we won't find out whose baby it is until the end eh?
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  • From myangeldraco on November 15, 2007
    wow this story is going in so many directions...something new and exciting everyday!! Please update soon!!!
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