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Reviews for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

By : reirei
  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2007
    You need to update! I want to know how Hermione is going to get away from Voldemort.
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  • From kalderas on November 07, 2007
    *breaks the surface, gasping for air* phew, up to chap18, and i LOOOVE this! the aftermath of luna's rape almost made me cry...really, eyes glazed over. great job. once u accept that shit will get worse and detach a bit, u can really enjoy this. i'm kinda glad herm snapped, the he loves me, he loves he not, 1 step forward 5 steps back thing they were doing was so infuriating. sometimes it takes radical actions to get people honest. i'm not sure if this is realistic, but wouldn't it be great if herm went all crazed deatheater, became lovers w/ rudy strange, the whole 9. her friends wouldn't want to leave her, but they would if they had to and could b more help to her outa hogwarts than in. and draco has to step up and reel her back in. she would never b the goody2shoes again, but lets not kid ourselves she's never gonna get that innocence back now anyway. but u might have decided to take this path or another already and i just haven't read it yet. kudos for not being pummeled by my extensive collection of kitchenwares..yet. oh and is the Hogwarts Malestrom instead of Maelstrom on propose? some pun that flew overhead maybe. ok, imma try to catch up to the rest of the reader's. ^.^v*dives back under*
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  • From janl on November 07, 2007
    You are doing such a great job! And I'm so glad that you're adding chapters so fast. It makes it so much easier to keep in the flow of the story! Thanks for writing it, you're very talented.
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  • From chelleybelle on November 07, 2007
    Excellent chapter, I loved it...did she manage to overcome the pull of the vertiserum and tell voldemort what he wanted to hear? she didn't really stay behind for Draco, she stayed behind because she was tied up...and Voldemort called her a "so called mudblood". does he know something that we don't??????
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  • From Damiana on November 07, 2007
    Gah! That latest plot twist (chapter 19) bowled me over! So angsty but so intense...whee!

    I understand why you don't have a beta (considering the amount of text that you put out in such short periods of time) but your writing would gain so much from it... Well I can't promise anything but I could try to beta for you.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 07, 2007
    yeah baby!!! I'm loving the progression of this....I think I know who that baby is...lol. I hope it's who I think it is anyway. This story is so damn good...Anything for Draco huh Hermione? That's so damn sexy...I hope when they get out of this mess (please tell me they do) he reminds her she said that ;>)
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  • From strangerdanger89 on November 07, 2007
    Hey I have a suggestion for you.
    I think you should take a look at a site called Grangerenchanted.com/enchant . It is a site where hermione fanatics post their stories and or read other peoples. Your stories would get lots of hits and plenty of feed back from the experianced writer along with tons of people eager to read what you have writen.
    I hope you give the site a shot I am sure you will like it.
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  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    Thanks ReiRei, but honestly it was a while ago and yes it destroyed me for a bit, but I've had a little boy since then but unfortunately I lost a baby exactly a year ago now and it took it out of me for a while I mean I only went back into work three weeks ago I thanked you in time lost for helping through my 'down' time cause your stories have helped me see my life through another better life, it may seem strange to you and maybe others that read this review but I don't care, as long as I'm feeling good again for not only myself but my family that's all that matters right?!! I hope when this story finishes you decide to write many more, in my eyes you are very talented and I feel like I should be paying to read your work!!! I'm off ill today hence the longer reviews lol anyway please update soon luv Angel xx
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  • From strangerdanger89 on November 07, 2007
    wow that is intence!! I can't wait for another update though. It is a fantastic story plot.

    Sasha
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  • From myangeldraco on November 07, 2007
    Really good chapters but chapter 19 sorta hit on a personal tragedy of my own so I cried buckets, I'm slowly getting over it now though. So is the child Hermione?!! update soon please xx
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 07, 2007
    Chile' this chapter was a doozy...I heard myself saying oooooooo ooooo several times. I totally agree with you, Hermione isn't really OOC as much as cracking under the strain of her situation. I really see darkness in all of the trio so I'm glad you went there. I hope that bitch Romilda dies...the whole Hermione turning dark reminds me a bit of Anakin but I hope she can be saved and doesn't join the dark side...keep the quick updates coming!!!
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  • From brokenvixen on November 07, 2007
    i agree with you with what you said about hermione. she's passionate and couragious, she even knows how how to deal with submission. update soon! i love your story!
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  • From chelleybelle on November 07, 2007
    I wouldn't considered it OOC. Like you said, everyone has a breaking point and she was pushed quite far. She walked in on the man that she loved having sex with another woman. That was the straw that broke the camels back. She had been used and abused by both Draco and Lestrange, and she over came that, but she couldn't look past Draco doing it with another witch. She felt betrayed and it finally broke her. Romilda Vain deserved what she got and I really hope that nobody knows the cure for the spell and she bleeds to death...maybe voldemort will respect her fire and courage and decide to keep hermione as a pet or something good like that...
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  • From chickaboo on November 07, 2007
    This story is so heartbreakingly sad but SO GOOD too! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - lady snape on November 07, 2007
    I love this story and where your going with it, I picked that Nia was the snake very well dont though It is sad to know she might have to die. I say might cause you may have a trick up your sleeve. I cannot wait for the next chapter :-D
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