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Reviews for Hogwarts Maelstrom. Completed!

By : reirei
  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2007
    bloody fantastic chappie!!!
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  • From mhaj78 on October 28, 2007
    OMG HE IS INTENTIONALLY USING HER LIKE THAT!! OMG, OMG--DID NOT SEE THAT!!

    OMG

    Wow. Okay, I think I've recovered.

    Wow. Wow. Amazing. You are a genius, how in the world do you think these things up?!

    Okay--great writing. The phrasing is great, the conversations believable, the characters heart-wrenching but believable based on JK's characters--but also believable enough changes to them. I'm not one of those people who believe everyone needs to be in character--but you've kept them in character and expanded them. Love it!

    Can't WAIT for the next update! :)
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  • From Carine on October 28, 2007
    Hi ReiRei,
    thank you for the nice compliments (reader's deeply blushing)You know I usually am not such a fervent reviewer,but I always get so excited when I read your updates that my inner-self pushes me to review-(even against my will....)YES concerning your writing I am completely will-less.I'm almost acting like a zombie and after reading the update my fingers just jump to the review butten.BUT I KNOW:You put me under the IMPERIUS.Maybe I should report this to the aurors.Tsk!Tsk.
    I share your opinion that Neville's abilities are sometimes completely underestimated.He was the second option mentioned in the prophecy and I think that by making him kill Nagini in book 7 JKR clearly states that in her opinion the Harry Potter universe could also have been a Neville Longbottem one if Voldemort had interpreted the prophecy differently and marked Neville as his nemesis.I think they were both meant to cause Voldemort's downfall.In your story he seems to be a very good actor. I hope he can help Luna without being recognized as a spy.
    So Harry is alive!!!But who's the girl he is kept prisoner with.I know you will come up with a stunning revelation LIKE ALWAYS!!Lol Sureves Epans

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  • From mhaj78 on October 28, 2007
    Last night's review was written so late--I got you now--they're staying at Hogwarts, he just has his own room...right? I promise, I'm not usually as ditzy as I've demonstrated here!! Geez!!
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  • From WendelinTheWeird on October 28, 2007
    Well well well, isn't this an unusual story, gotta say I'm loving it. The bits with the Carrows is not nice but very skillfully written. Poor Mariah! Poor Ginny! Poor Hermoine!!!
    Although she has Draco who sounds very sexy. Oh I really don't think Neville is a true Death Eater, it's all his plan to break free. Introducing Luna is a rare move in fics but a clever one, personally i have always loved her character.
    And as for Dramione...sigh. So very sexy.
    Oooh the uniforms crack me up, in a totally perverse way.
    Anyway loving the story, read it all last night. lease update soon.

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  • From mhaj78 on October 28, 2007
    Whew. Well, that was amazing.

    There is so much in this chapter!! You've foreshadowed a LOT. Draco's response when Hermione leaned her head on his shoulder--and the fact that she even DID that is huge!

    Neville--holy crap, I don't know WHAT you're going to do with that story line but DAMN. It could go a couple of ways! Either way, I was glad Ginny ended up in his custody. Ditto for Luna.

    And George's revelation about Harry Potter--so maybe there IS hope!!! Wow!!

    Hermione taking the hexes for the others--and again, Draco's response at her putting herself in danger for the sake of the others--makes my heart break! I'm glad it resulted in Pansy losing Ginny.

    Thinking of 12 year olds forced into a situation like that--so sad. And I should probably go back and re-read to discover, but are they apparating to Hogwarts for classes? Are they having them there at the Manor? Not like it really matters, I just can't remember.

    You're doing great AND you've made my weekend by posting so frequently. You rock!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From mariecke22 on October 27, 2007
    simply love it!!
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  • From on October 27, 2007
    another awesome update. *grins* can't wait to see the next one.
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  • From ANON - claudia on October 27, 2007
    I like the realism of Draco showing compassion to hermoine and neville being a double agent wiseguy who wants to protect ginny and luna while pretending to enslave them.

    Hope you keep up the good work

    claudia
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2007
    Your a great writer but I would love it if you made your chapters a little bit longer. Also, please update soon like right now soon.
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  • From ANON - SilentSnickers on October 27, 2007


    I am actually enjoying this story a bit. Continue with the dark angsty stuff. Its fab!

    I will be watching!
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  • From myangeldraco on October 27, 2007
    I think he had me fooled too!lolxx, excellent update please continue on your fantastic fic's !!!!! xax
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  • From myangeldraco on October 27, 2007
    Not started reading chapter 6 yet, but god girl on both your stories I've reviewed wanting more only to find out that straight after my review their is a new chapter!!!..... Oh, and that was sweet how you mentioned me as one of your favourite reviewers. Right I'll get on with the reading now!!!!! xax
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  • From reirei on October 27, 2007
    LOL Angel, I just updated when you reviewed. :P As for Neville... maybe? We'll see!!!!!!!
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  • From myangeldraco on October 27, 2007
    So, does this mean that Neville is going to try and find Harry? I'm wondering who the girl is that he was with that George has never seen before?!! I'm up for some more DM/HG so please update ASAP luv xax
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