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Reviews for Tension in the Laboratory

By : InkStainedWretch
  • From sheherazade on January 18, 2008
    Ah, wow, kind of a sudden ending, but I can see why it has finished where it has. This was a wonderful (very hot) chapter - that line about Hermione being in the sexual thrall of a man who was both more powerful and more vulnerable than her was spot on; well put. I think Snape is right about Hermione being used to/needing control all the time, and having a touch of superiority complex about her. (In my mind, this is why SS/HG generally doesn't work for me, among other considerations).

    I enjoyed this so much. I wonder if you'd consider a sequel?
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  • From MaraudingLady on January 10, 2008
    To answer your question about pop, I've heard the Brits call it Fizzy drinks. Hope that helps! Love the way you write Severus!
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  • From ANON - aliciana on January 10, 2008
    Sorry I've not reviewed in a while. No excuses.....just Christmas, New Year etc. Your story is going from strength to strength and the plot is developing nicely. Again I reiterate, it is a very intelligent read and easily holds one's attention. Well done. I agree with Sheherazade's definitions of "soda" and "breaking off a relationship". The "dumping" one being particularly explicit. Of course, we Brits have different terms for different things depending on which part of the UK we live in. I like Severus stories where his "North of England" dry wit and humour are brought to the fore. This of course has nothing to do with the fact that I live in the North of England. North-east Lancashire to be precise. And married one too. NOT!!!!!!!!! Hell, although I live in the countryside, I can see a mill chimney out of my front window. They are scrubbing these mills up now into yuppy flats or posh offices. So the Weasel is coming back into the mix. Good idea. But he can't take the place of Sev, can he? Anyway time to brave the wind and the rain (it's like bloody Wuthering Heights up here) and take the dog out. Happy New Year. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
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  • From sheherazade on January 10, 2008
    Uh oh, Ron's back to stir things up...I did like his smile disappearing 'like a flame in a draft'. Nice image.

    We don't say soda, but there isn't really a generic term for carbonated drinks here - if you're talking to a child you might say 'fizzy pop' or 'fizz' but usually we just use the proprietary names.

    You can 'break off' a relationship, or 'break it off'. You can also 'finish with' a person, or 'dump' them.

    So are we going to see a jealous Snape? *rubs hands*
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  • From Delfin on December 19, 2007
    yei :)

    oh well what can i tell i always love to read a new chapter of this awesome story! =D

    n cant wait to see what's Snape has got under his sleeve hehe
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 11, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From areader on December 11, 2007
    I think this was a fantastic installment. I really really liked how you made their first time awkward and uncomfortable, because it was much more realistic than most fics. This follow-up session was hot but not over the top "and the mountains roared." I really like this fic thus far.
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  • From amsev on December 10, 2007
    Holy Buckets!!!!! That would have to count as an EVIL CLIFFHANGER! As always, I was delighted to see the little update email in my inbox and came right over here to read. More! More! More!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From sheherazade on December 03, 2007
    Glad that little misunderstanding was cleared up - but now they need to capitalise on it! In the bedroom! Waiting for more lusciousness.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 02, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.


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  • From Amaris on December 02, 2007
    lol when I got to them in bed and had her thrown over the foot board you kept using the word counterpane. lol all i could think was... what the hell isn't she laying on the bed. Then she bit it and I thought ah okay it's a comforter so better look that up to be sure... and very glad to find she was indeed biting the comforter and not something very hard like a counter. You must be British. lol so that little misunderstanding was funny for me. Great story and really enjoy reading it. : )
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  • From amsev on December 01, 2007
    ooooh! Nice lemon pie heating up. ROFL:
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  • From ANON - Jesse on November 30, 2007
    That's it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????? AHH!! How DARE you!! Please update soon! I love your story and your writing!
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  • From amsev on November 29, 2007
    This story is engrossing AND sexy. "Then the eyes opened, glittering." Yummers! Evil cliffie. I look forward to seeing my FFN update in my FFN inbox knowing that I can wander over here and read your story in its full glory of NC-17-ness. Please update soon!
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