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Reviews for Tension in the Laboratory

By : InkStainedWretch
  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on August 16, 2015
    Really? This is how you end it?
    Severus is unclear and it never is explained does he truly want anything at all? What is it he wants? Why offer marriage? It makes no sense.
    Hermione is also not perfectly consistent - but at least she has an excuse as to why.
    Harry, Ron & Ginny appear, as if by a magical wish, whenever you feel like having them in the story without a real excuse as to why they are at Hogwarts. (Unless Ginny is still a student and then why would she go to Hogsmeade without permit on a whim?).
    It seems like you couldn't decide what you wanted to achieve yourself and the changes happen from between different chapters.
    I saw you wrote a follow-up story but unless you do intend to write more than one possible continuation it would have better been left in this story.
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  • From purefaith91 on November 21, 2010
    For once, I feel some empathy for Snape. He has no tact, but that is because he has stifled that in himself as a self protection tool. HG is acting a little like a high school kid instead of a 20 Year old (I think I read somewhere, but she is at least 18 or 19). I still don't get what her deal is...she all but threw herself at him and then when he allows himself to feel for her, she is confused and insecure. And I find it hard to believe that it is because she was a virgin as she has kept company with boys mostly and surely living that close to some of those girls, gets a close up of what is involved. Oh well, this is so good I am guessing that you will clear it up shortly. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 20, 2010
    How can she assume that SS is not doing the same with her that he had just confessed to doing with everyone else (for the cause)? I would find it extremely hard to believe that I was somehow better than those he was hoodwinking, and so would not play those games with me. And the fact that he plans to obliviate her is even more disconcerting. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 20, 2010
    Now there is a skill I could have used many times in my life. Good for her for letting SS know that she heard them and not leaving him to try to figure out what her problem is. Just keeps getting better. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 20, 2010
    Interesting. I don't understand her discomfort and uncertainty though, as it seems that she wants to be with him, doesn't she? Or is it because she recognizes that she is in over her head? Can't wait to see where this goes. p
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From mlui on May 14, 2008
    A very lovely story. I thought Hermione is a bit out of character and Severus seems to be able to downtrodden her at times which I found were annoying. The story really doesn't actually seem to end yet...so what happened to them as a couple. Are they still unofficially engaged?
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  • From Queeny on March 03, 2008
    Glad to know there's a sequal xD Or else I would be MAD
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  • From Queeny on March 03, 2008
    Really awkward sex. xD Wow. Very well done. I like this story, although to be honest I had a really hard time getting into it.

    Wow wedding proposal. Gotta read more!
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  • From ANON - ladyjulian on February 16, 2008
    This is an amazing story, with subtle characterisation and wonderful prose. Why isn't it more readily available???
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  • From Savaial on January 23, 2008
    Very good, suspenseful and erotic story. I can taste the tension. Things keep building and building like Ravel's Bolero. I feel you've treated the characters realisticly too; no one seems out of character to me. Very nice work.
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 23, 2008
    Chapters 1-24: I started reading your story and just kept on reading and reading
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 22, 2008
    This was a great fic. I think your and awesome writer. And it
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - a_reader on January 19, 2008
    I've loved this story since the first chapter, not the least because Hermione's first time with Severus was so much more realistic than 99% of the fics written.

    I'm a little perplexed at the abrupt ending, though. Even with a possible sequel, it seems a strange point to bring it to an end. I hope you do follow through with it. Thanks for writing.
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