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Reviews for A Room in the Dungeons

By : Severusluciusallthebadboys
  • From TenderQuaintWitch on November 02, 2007
    Ah, the plot thickens! Update soon, please.
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  • From CandyxCotton on November 02, 2007
    Brilliant. Please update soon!
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on November 02, 2007
    Well, I have an idea. Suppose you add a year with each chapter? Like...something happens at every yule ball until her graduation? It would be interesting with what you could come up with after every dance.

    Red

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  • From Heidi191976 on November 02, 2007
    This wa a great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on October 28, 2007
    Hi,

    First off, I have to say that I read the first third chapter and wasnt that thrilled with it, but this second one is sooooo much better. I'm not a fan of underaged sex. I like that this Severus was able to resist that temptation. He only has to wait another two or th ree years...right? (Depending on if you are using the Time Turner theory) I am looking forward to reading more.

    Red Writing Hood
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  • From Obezyanka on October 28, 2007
    The third chapter was better :) I liked it :)
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  • From Obezyanka on October 27, 2007
    Hi there again,

    Thank you for your lovely note. If you wish to talk with me via email or msn. My email is czar_obezyanka@yahoo.com
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  • From kmplease on October 27, 2007
    Please update soon, I love this story!!
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  • From Carine on October 27, 2007
    Hi Lucius marryme,
    basicly I like your story,but I have a slight problem with the idea that Hermione is only in her 4th year.I do not think that even a drunk Severus would have slept with a student under the age of consent.Though I can understand that a student may have a crush on its professor,I hope that Severus will try to wait until Hermione has at least reached her 17 years.Sorry but I'm not a fan of minor stories.But I promise to read the next chapters,maybe the story will take a different storyline.Please don't feel offended.LOL Sureves Epans
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 27, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Obezyanka on October 27, 2007
    Okay first two chapters were great. This chapter well it wasnt that good. Firstly you made Severus seem like students lust after him. Which if I am not mistaken is false.
    I am not sure if your a virgin or not. To have one's hymen broken isn't a fun thing. Seriously it is very painful. I am sure other readers would agree.
    Why does Severus have to have a "huge" penis? I am so sick of stories saying he or any other male has a huge penis. Average is pretty good. You also seem to be in a rush.
    I am not sure if it is your first ever story.
    Maybe you can read it over again.

    O
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  • From Obezyanka on October 27, 2007
    OMG a wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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