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Reviews for Love Thy Enemy

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From angeleye68 on November 07, 2007
    I have been reading this story for the past week as I have just stumbled across this lovely work of fiction that is better than anything I had read in quite a while. To say I love this story is an understatement. I just got done reading the last three chapters that you wrote and I want to scream at Lucius' actions in chapter 33 to Hermione, he hurt her more with those words than when he accidental bruised her arms When she took off her rings and said "you broke my heart" oh my god, my stomach dropped. Your writing is excellent, emotional and so descriptive, it is absolutely wonderful. And now he will have to really fight for her to get her back.

    Brava! Brava! Brava!
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  • From wicraven on November 07, 2007
    Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Val on November 07, 2007
    Hi,

    This is the first time that I review one of your fanfic though I read them all (sorry I'm lazy ;)). I just thought I would let you know (at last) how much I appreciate your stories. It's just so rare to find a talented LM/HG fanfiction writer so thanks for sharing :)!!! I love them!

    Also, I wanted to ask you if you post your fanfics at other sites (like LJ)than adultfanfiction.net?

    Bye
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  • From ANON - koneko-chan on November 07, 2007
    Is Hermione going to get pregnant?? All this and no contraceptive spell, tsk tsk Lucius lol. Great story though. I love reading it! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - tildycatpuss on November 07, 2007
    Hello I have just come across your story and I wanted to just tell you how much I love it. I really enjoy Lucius/Hermione fics and the premise of this one is brilliant. I really like the fact that both of them are falling for each other in a major way but has yet to voice it to each other. keep up the good work.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 07, 2007
    A great chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens.
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  • From Citten on November 07, 2007
    i think i am right in assuming that the binding rings are now gone and they just dont know it yet. well if i am-they are going to be very intresting to watch espically sense they just dont want to admit their feeling to each other. well if i am wrong well.... just write another chapter PLEASE AND SOON!!! ps i loved the 'dasiy chain' :)
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  • From EmiGirl on November 07, 2007
    I'm loving this story! I just wish there was a way for me to be notified when it was updated!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 07, 2007
    Chapter 32: Well, except for a bit of nostalgia for making daisy chains (I haven
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  • From tootie on November 07, 2007
    How does that saying go again---tit for tat! I'm glad you are writing Hermione as woman newly introduced to sex as an adventurous, eager to learn participant instead of someone who acts like she's never seen a man's penis and so afraid of Lucius' or Snape's ability to seduce her that she comes off looking like a wimpering, effing idiot, instead of the intelligent woman that she is. What I love most is the quick witted back and forth verbal sparring, which is sexual tension at it's best. You've kept Lucius as he should be, sitting right on the fence, not mushy and not cruel. They both give as good as they get.

    Everyday, I feel I am being rewarded for good behavior, because sitting there waiting for me is another chapter to read. I envy you and Labib. your ability to write paragraphs that flow evenly from one to the next. Nothing is rushed or forced in your writing, does that make sense to you? I feel as if I am there watching the events unfold. I am so thankful for Harry Potter--I am not well and the world of Hogwarts and all it's characters was and still is a place I can go to, leaving all the crap in my life behind. I guess most would think I am silly, 48 years old and wishing I could go to Hogwarts but I think I am in good company here. I will admit that on occassion I have to remind myself that they don't really exist I'm still in denial---Snape isn't dead!!!
    Thanks to all of you authors, may your muse always be at your side and your fingers going lickity split across the keyboard! soorry about the length.
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  • From chickaboo on November 07, 2007
    That was absolutely fantastic! Just wonderful. I look forward to your updates every day and I can't wait for more!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 07, 2007
    Awesome chapter! Please add more soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 07, 2007
    Excellent chapter. I believe that they are truly in love with each other but yet they haven't realized it even though their rings are moving. I hope that they figure it out soon. I also hope that they have a baby or two together. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on November 07, 2007
    Okay so I almost flipped out when she got annoyed that her wedding BAND was loose and then when Lucius was twirling his around on his finger. I think it's funny that they're both now so used to having them on that they haven't stopped to think what that means. I loved the conversation Lucius had with Narcissa. I love this story and I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 07, 2007
    Chapter 31: Oooh, I love your view of Narcissa. I write her that way, too. She is NOT my favorite character, poor thing. She
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