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Reviews for Love Thy Enemy

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From bluezauza on October 31, 2007
    oh! so are we to expect a little bondage??? Lucius is very good at that , and already practicing??' Wee!!
    And it was a great first time for him to, under the desk! Great
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2007
    Chapter 19: I just love the hotness that flares up whenever those two come within talking distance. Soon it
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  • From ANON - jil88 on October 31, 2007
    i luv this fic! lots of smut, YAY! but lucius needs to be less soft and more demanding i think. cant wait for the next chappy!!!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on October 31, 2007
    Yaaaay smut! I think I'm getting into this a bit too much. Anyway, I actually was wondering how the whole spanking etc. thing would go with the spell in place, whether they'd have to fall in love first or not. Glad to hear they can get into the more interesting stuff if they wish. I wonder though, if Hermione is afraid/nervous at first, will that trigger the spell? If he were to sneak the spanking or whatever on her, say, and it startled her. *shrug*

    Man, that sucks about Betas flaking out on you. I've never Beta'ed before, but I like to think I'm obsessive enough about language not to flake. Anyway, you don't need one all that badly; like I said, it's pretty much typos, and they're hard to catch when you're writing. You write a lot faster than I do, so it's no wonder.
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 31, 2007
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 31, 2007
    Awesome chapter! Great story too. Please add more soon
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  • From chickaboo on October 31, 2007
    Fatastic! I loved that they ended up under the desk. It just goes to show how passionate they were at the moment. And fire proofing her clothes.....that was too funny. Ya know, I'd be interested in seeing what dear ol' Lucius would say were Hermione to go prancing about the house in Slytherin sweats.....anyway. Can't wait for more!
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  • From on October 31, 2007
    Please, never deny Lucius' desire for smut. I'm sure none of us mind! I love the slow build... but I'm ready for some stronger emotions. I know, all in good time.
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  • From ANON - Banana Flavored Eskimo on October 31, 2007
    I have no idea how they ended up under the desk, really and truly I don
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on October 31, 2007
    "Worshipping the goddess in the moon light"!!!!!!!! I swoon. OMG that was amazing. Again I ask why can't I have him? I promise to give him back at a later date.
    OK scared about Kingsley now, but remembering that all your stories have happy endings.
    Will send you some gorgeous pictures of Lucius to make up for your lack in the painting abilities (such a great writer shouldn't be able to paint because then you would be too accomplished and the rest of us would look like fools).
    Happy writing.....
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2007
    Chapter 18: If Lucius was up until the wee hours of the morning, what specific hours must he be in bed with Hermione? Can he work all night and evade the rings
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2007
    Chapter 17: I still think Shacklebolt still only wants the best for our two protagonists. It
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  • From ffpoisongirl on October 31, 2007
    Lucius WOULD write off the beginnings of love as heart trouble. Ugh, MEN. Not that I can speak from much experience.

    Sooo... Yes. Hotness. Fun for all. I'm glad to see that Lucius could be gentle with his new wife, but I have to ask, will they be getting into more... shall we say "interesting" pursuits? Either way I'll keep reading, but I like interesting.

    I like how you're taking it slow, not instantly transforming it into "omfg lucius i luv youzorz!!!1"

    There are a couple of instances where you make typos, mainly saying "he" instead of "she" or "her." Just a heads up, you might wanna give it a quick once-over before posting, or have a Beta look it over. If you're interested, I wouldn't mind Beta-ing, but I'm sure you can catch the mistakes by yourself. I really like your writing style, and wish you luck.
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 31, 2007
    Chapter 16: Ahh, some good, old-fashioned smut. Even if poor Lucius didn
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 30, 2007
    OMG
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