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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Lola on October 30, 2007
    AAAAAAHHHH! I love this!!! Thank you for your general good spelling, paragraph indentation and decent use of the english language! lol. Oh, god, you have to finish this; like right now (grin)I'm goin crazy, love your Lucious, and wait for the next chapter!!! (PS, for SOME STRANGE reason this has been repeating in the backround while I read your story, check it out (grin)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jRxtLwm1MtA&feature=PlayList&p=7C0AAF6B767C7ACC&index=44
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on October 30, 2007
    AHHHHH! You did not just leave it there. You'll be the death of us. Well chocolate mouse will never be the same again. I want Lucius, why oh why can't I have him?
    I got a little worried about Kingsley, his reaction was strange I got the feeling he wasn't expecting things to work out and so the marriage isn't really real, he was just faking or something. Will he stand up at the wedding ball and tell them it wasn't real? More, more, more, please.....happy writing.
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  • From Sampdoria on October 30, 2007
    Oh, you can be assure that I love the bickering between Hermione and Lucius, it is brilliant and so in caracter for those two! Bickering like this suites the Lucius/Hermione pairing, bickering, sexual tension and somewhere along the line more sincere feelings, but without loosing the bickering. I don't think Lucius could ever be satisfied with a meek and weak spouse, the figths and resistance is what triggers his emoitions and challenges him. Hermione needs Lucius to prevent her life from being dull:-) The man is looks, brains and sex on legs, what more can a girl want:-))
    What works in a Lucius/Hermione pairing would come out odd and wrong in a pairing with Hermione and Severus, Remus or Sirius (I always prefer her paired with the older men in HP-fandom, none of the "boys" have ever been attractive in my eyes). Just as you could not change the name from Lucius to Remus in a Hermione/Lucius story, the Lucius caracter will not work in a Remus/Hermione story. The plots are different (one of the reasons they are so fun to read), different caracters demands different plots.
    The last sentence in this chapter (17) where Lucius automaticly thought he migth have come down with something because of the odd feelings he had was brilliant, and so in caracter for Lucius!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 30, 2007
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From bluezauza on October 30, 2007
    WOOOOW!!! Er.... *FALLS FROM CHAIR*!!! That was Hot!! Thank you

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  • From LaBibliographe on October 30, 2007
    Chapter 8: I liked how Hermione put the Pureblood witch in her place. The atmosphere in the car going home was so thick with lust, I could have cut a piece out for myself. This story is getting hotter and hotter. Absolutely juicy.

    The writing just flows along so smoothly. Great work!

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  • From LaBibliographe on October 30, 2007
    Chapter 7: I
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  • From on October 30, 2007
    Oh my! That was so hot and they haven't done that much yet! Can't wait for more!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 30, 2007
    Wow SG! Great updates. Awesome job! Very well done. Please add more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on October 30, 2007
    Good lord honey. I'm not sure how many more of these 'teaser' scenes I can take. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 30, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From DB1 on October 30, 2007
    @16 i love this story, i love how hermione is so confused about her feelings for lucius it makes the story more real. please update soon.

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on October 30, 2007
    Hmm does this mean Lucius will smell like a strawberry now? I am interested in the fact the Lucius likes his arguments with Hermione. Was it a coincidence that they always ran into each other to have their battles? They never used to see each other in the street that often, perhaps he was seeking her out.
    I love 'midsummers', I was in it during college. That will be a gorgeous ball, Hermione should be a wood nymph.
    I understand the whole needing to speak with people that are over 3 feet tall. Glam up for when Hubby returns and blow his mind with your gorgeousness.
    This fic is getting hot hot hot (hmmmm Lucius.......) sorry dazed out for second there. New word for the day 'cause it's just fun to say - hornswoggle. Happy writing....
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  • From ffpoisongirl on October 30, 2007
    Guh... buh... flubbuh...

    *ahem* Wow. Now that the blood (and with it, coherent thought) has returned to my brain, I can safely say that that is the hottest non-intercourse scene I've ever read. I was hesitant to read this at first (forced marriage being a bit overdone), but I really enjoy the twist with the charmed rings. Lucius is a right bastard, and you convey that so well. I can't wait for more!

    Oh, and one thing, I think it was in chapter 15. You used the word "feint" to describe losing consciousness. The proper word is "faint." To feint means to fake something, like a football player would feint to the right to convince the opposing team he's going right, but then actually go left. I know Microsoft Word is a pain in the arse like that; it tells if you spelled a word wrong, but not if you used the wrong word. I've caught myself doing that. I hope you don't get offended, I'm grammar obsessed.
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  • From DB1 on October 30, 2007
    @15. great chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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