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By : Severusluciusallthebadboys
  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2008
    Please update soon!!!

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  • From Solomon on April 06, 2008
    please email me when you update .The pregnancy would fit better than the monthly mess. Come on now, with his body changing back with the baby being a healthy little boy and malfoy having to take responsability for being a WHORE What about this bracelet? PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From darrena on March 06, 2008
    great chapter!!! Poor Harry ... Looking forward to more :)
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  • From alma on January 31, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From QueenB on January 29, 2008
    Ch. 5 So the shame and guilt has set in. At least Harry is handling both better than I expected. Draco seems to be keeping his distance for the moment; I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing at this point.

    The part where Harry swears he's going to be better at sex when he's a boy again WAS a little funny but touching, too. If being a girl gives him a unique perspective and subsequent compassion for women, then this whole experience isn't too bad.
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  • From QueenB on January 29, 2008
    Ch. 4 Congratulations on a realistic depiction of first sex. While we read fanfiction for the wild and crazy sex acts where everybody comes at least twice, lubrication is always handy and people experience orgasmic ecstasy that feels as if they're orbiting the moon, the reality is usually far more sordid. You really hit the nail on the head with this chapter.

    Harry gave in far too easily to his hormones and now is paying the price. Right now, he's realizing that being a girl isn't as easy as he thought; I hope he goes to Hermione with this news and that she's understanding and not condemning of his mistake.
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  • From QueenB on January 29, 2008
    Ch. 3 Harry's fallen into his new role rather easily, hasn't he? Well, you already have my opinion about such easy acceptance so I won't repeat it. It's a shame he's abandoning Hermione so easily for girls he's barely spoken to but maybe this will help expand his social circle and make it easier to pass as a girl.

    I'm wondering about the lie Hermione told. Harry supposedly has changed his sex but is still the same basic person he was before the spell. If he's from California, shouldn't he have an American accent? If he still has his English one, why haven't the girls commented about it?
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 28, 2008
    Uh oh! Surely Harry isn't pregnant!!! Oh this would be bad!!! Sooo need chapter 6
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  • From NightLo on January 28, 2008
    ...hum...a really 'great' experience for Harry...now his repsect for girls and women would be higher...

    Has Minerva heard something?
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  • From mumimeanjudy on January 28, 2008
    Harry is near-sighted. Reading glasses would only make his vision worse.

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  • From Extraho on January 27, 2008
    damn! he had to make up for that!!! though, who does actually have an orgasm their first time. its almost impossible because the inner muscles are not used to being well, beat up! no matter what you do by yourself there is little that can compare to a guys - merlin this sounds strange - 'hip power' you get my point right. yeah you do. im blabbing. love the story though.
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  • From NightLo on January 27, 2008
    ...hum...Harry finally experienced what girls experienced - the feeling of lost and the need to sob...will she talk with Hermione? How is his/her 'relationship' with Draco?
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  • From bananasforyou on January 27, 2008
    poor harry!good chap!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2008
    Oh Harry! That was stupid! Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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  • From serenagold on January 26, 2008
    Awww...aahhhahahahahahahahahhhah aha haha ha hahah a heheheheheh =^^=

    Aw, poor Harry. He gets a taste of bad, awful, first-time teenage sex and finds its not all its cracked up to be. Good thing he's a horny little tart and will probably try again. >:) Although you gotta feel bad for him as Draco just fell asleep afterwards and left him completely unsatisfied. (Hehehehe)


    Keep up the great work. I'm lovin' this story.
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