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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From Sparkykiki on July 19, 2008
    ROTF LMAO! That was perfect. Just perfect. Gotta love Fred and George. You write them so beautifully...I wish I could write the twins like that! I'm also uber excited that Draco and Hermione admitted how they felt to each other and now I'm trying to figure out who the fifth person should be. I'm going to have to think long and hard about that.

    Congratulations on your awards. This story really deserves it. :D

    ~Sparky
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  • From smmz79 on July 19, 2008
    ahh i think i melted when she found those tickets... why do i have a funny feeling that this is slowly not becoming just sex for draco as well....
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  • From ANON - yeniferr on July 19, 2008
    Can't Hermione do it? She's not related to Zane. And Lupin can do it even though he's related by marraige.

    Of course, she does want custody of him but... dude, seriously. It's the law, there are loopholes EVERYWHERE.

    Good chapter by the way. (:
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  • From smmz79 on July 19, 2008
    what a great chap i know i know i say that alot but really it is true... way to save the day draco... and what a great sex scene yes it was short and all that but i mean really he has had his hand for four years do you really think he would be able to participate in marathon sex...
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  • From sweething10 on July 19, 2008
    A bald Pansy! Love it! She deserves it, and so much more. I think it was brilliant to make Fred and George the ones to help Zane out. Draco will have no choice but to see the Weasley's in a different light now.

    Finally Hermione and Draco admit their feelings for each other! I loved the back and forth, "I hated you because" moment. And the "I don't like you" thing is really cute too.

    Thank goodness Zane hasn't suffered too much yet. I hope Pansy and her dumbass husband aren't too nasty to him once they find out he's playing these tricks on them.
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  • From smmz79 on July 18, 2008
    what a great chap... wow did hermione ever fluster the DMP lady... how funny
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  • From sugypunk on July 18, 2008
    Aw... I loved how they professed their love for each other... and having Zane play tricks on Pansy is wonderful. Can't wait to see what the next one is! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2008
    i absolutely LOOOOVEEEE your story!
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  • From chickaboo on July 18, 2008
    Oh yay! Things are looking up!! I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2008
    I loved this chapter. How wonderful that Rhonda is going to help them and by all means Hermione, PLEASE do some matchmaking. LOL That was so realistic the way Hermione and Draco clung to eachother, made their confession of love and yet made it somehow a side track to their grief as they sought physical comfort from one another. Zane not being there was like a death in the family in a way and their reaction to that was a natural one. Wonderful how the twins showed up to cheer Zane up and rope him in to their little plan not to mention the early morning result and Zane's acknowledgement of it. LOL And finally, I can hardly wait to find out who the fifth person is that they need to find to proceed with their legal arrangements. Who could it be????? Brilliant, as always. :)
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  • From mitsuthenekogirl on July 18, 2008
    Awesome chapter. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - OliversBludger on July 18, 2008
    Fantastic...I love that Pansy is bald now!

    I also think that the whole, "I don't like you," thing between Draco and Hermione is priceless! And Fred and George are amazing! And Zane is ADORABLE! And...and...and...you're awesome and I hope you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - alle on July 18, 2008
    YES... im so glad hes giving pansy hell. i cant believe that shes lasted this long.
    hopefully hermione and draco can find somone else to testify for them. what about like some sort of long lost friend? just like somone totally random? lol! *crosses fingers* thank god they found an alternative way for getting zane back.
    and i am so glad that they finally atmitted their love (or not likes?) to each other... that was a really cute and original scene, i enjoyed it a lot. hopefully they will stay together after they get zane back.
    GREAT JOB! another chapter soon please!
    -alle

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  • From HarryPotterFan on July 18, 2008
    Zane is soooo cute!!!! Go Fred & George. Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2008
    I really like your story. I can't wait for more chapters to come soon
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