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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From ANON - Amiastine on July 15, 2008
    Gaaaaah!!!! Nooo.... I really felt like crying then... poor Zane!!! Poor everyone in fact!!! I really hope they rescue Zane from Pansy...
    I really like your fanfic, it has one of those plots that grip the reader and refuse to let go. The way you portray your characters is wonderful! Please continue soon! xx Amiastine
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  • From ANON - Irene on July 13, 2008
    I so love this story and the way that the Ministry is highly archaic and Pansy is such a B^%$&%. I can't wait to find out how Hermione and Draco get their son back and get "revenge" on them.
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 13, 2008
    Ooooh Nooo! I actually started crying when that stupid lady came to make Draco and Mione leave!! How horrible!!
    I'm soo sad.. They have y figure out how to get Zane back!!
    Poor Zane, waking up to find stupid Pansy. Don't worry baby Zane, your mummy and daddy will save you!
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  • From ANON - Amaya on July 13, 2008
    What a bitch! i think this is the only story in which i hated Pansy so much. Your doing great i can't wait to find out what happens next. I kind of feel sorry for the women who had to deliver the message to them. She was shaking in her shoes i bet and Lucius purposely smashed her poor foot. HAHA! :)
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  • From sweething10 on July 13, 2008
    No, no, no! That wretched Pansy can't get her grubby hands on that sweet boy! I hope you get him back with his real mummy and daddy soon. =)


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  • From chickaboo on July 12, 2008
    GET BACK HERE! I can't believe that happened! Although I just KNEW something like this would happen if they had to take him to a hospital. I just hope that Draco and Hermione and work it out together and be the support that the other needs and that they can get this all fixed. Maybe they'll be able to find a way to prove that slut-bag...uh I mean Pansy just wants money. I can't wait for more, please please please update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - emjay on July 12, 2008
    I am completely in love with this story! I think that your character development and pacing are perfect. I can't wait to see where you take it next. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us!
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  • From ANON - chikita_banana on July 12, 2008
    OHMY! Pansy got the full custody for zane! and poor draco and hermione! i cant believe it! i'm glad you finally updated, i love the chapter! :D
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    oh wow so hermione took care of draco and now he has all of these weird feelings.... way to go narcissa with her upcoming party it is time for them to act on this tension... :)
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    nice i loved this chap that dmp lady is going to be hysterical... and ohhh pansy is an idiot... great chap love the sexual tension...
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    oohhh what a horrible old bat lady... way to go hermione you tell her off.... how sweet of draco it has to be hard to live with someone that you hated your whole life then to start having tiny feeling s for them
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  • From ANON - MashaMalfoy on July 12, 2008
    Noooo... WHY!? Poor Zane... he's stuck with that awful cow. The chapter is great as usual, but it was so sad. I was crying like crazy. Only Donny and Lucious made me laugh:

    “When I was seven I wet my pants in front of my entire class back in primary school,” Donny said from the floor. “They called me ‘sprinkler’ until I was twelve.”

    OMG, that was something. Hope you'll update soon.
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    just watch what you wish for draco you just may get a mother for zane and a wife for you....
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    wow dracos romantic... how can hermione resist... ok i love what charlie said about donny and it is exactly how she is and that is why she is so fun to have as a character.. 'I like her, she's fiery..."... oh and some of the better more entertaining phrases from draco... 'greedy little newt fart.'... 'frizzy phantom'.... and one of my faves... 'i need to stop gifting him vodka for christmas.'
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  • From ANON - Emma on July 12, 2008
    Chapter 20 - wow, and i mean wow.
    Please dont make us wait as long for the next chapter as we had to wait for this one!!! I check EVERY day to see if you have updated.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update super fast!
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