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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    what another great chap.... i love this story so far... i love dracos internal conversations with his self... some of my favorites from this chap were... frizzy haired komodo dragon, baracuda... i love donny she is hysterical... she is one of my fave ofc those are hard to write and she is definitely not a mary sue very likeable... and funny... i love how she analyzes hermiones love life, and i loved the conversation where hermione called draco... an 'evil mutant ass face'... love love love it
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    this chap was great i love the way Zane innocently asked draco what a hottie was... that was great i can just see the look in dracos eyes like oh hell how do i get out of this one especially when he said that hermione was pretty that was funny.... i love how their thoughts kept going back to each other that was funny... great job oh and i forgot to say that your title for your first chap was great and very fitting i laughed so hard when i pieced it together
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  • From ANON - Jaimie on July 12, 2008
    Your storiy is genius!
    YOu always leave me wanting more.
    And what kind of name is Posey? It sounds like a Disease.
    As always thank you for your work.
    Jaimie
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    YEP i am in love... you have definitely kept hermione and dracos feelings towards each other true to the books... ahhh and zane is such a doll... hermione noticed that he was slightly insecure like he had been rejected... that is sooo sad... i wonder what is going to bring these two together hmmm???
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  • From smmz79 on July 12, 2008
    Ok so i have seen this story a couple of times when i checked to see the new updates... i am not sure why i never read it but now i am and i i can say is idiot this is a fabulous story... i love how you have written pansy she has also been great at playing evil... i love draco he is sooo down to earth and i love his inner dialogue.... it makes me laugh... oh and zane is soooo sweet well i am on to the next chap great job and keep going i cannot wait to see where this goes...
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  • From Sparkykiki on July 12, 2008
    I knew that this had to happen, but I'm still very, very sorry for Draco and Hermione. But on the bright side, maybe they can work out their issues while Zane is terrorizing Pansy. I can't wait to see more of that. I can just see her begging them to take him back!

    As always...I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - allie on July 11, 2008
    GODDAMN IT YOU GIVE ZANE BACK TO HERMIONE AND DRACO RIGHT NOW, I DONT CARE IF YOU HAVE TO CHANGE THE NEXT CHAPTER! I SWEAR TO GOD THAT I WILL NEVER LEAVE A REVIEW AGAIN, AND I CAN TELL YOU THAT I MEAN IT. *smilely sweetly* Now if you could be a dear and please update for me.
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  • From Baybeetricia on July 11, 2008
    What the fuck?

    You can't be serious!

    You got to fix this.....

    Pansy....oh, hell no...

    Fix this mess, please!
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  • From velvetbaby on July 11, 2008
    Merlin's pants, I was crying like a little baby after this chapter! I know how it feels when a child has to be taken away from their parents because of a law that barely applies to the situation the poor family is being blamed for. It's just downright awful to watch.

    I hope they get Zane back! I'll just fall into some sort of fanfic-induced coma if they don't! Then my soul will haunt you as my body slowly decays...

    Lets hope it doesn't come to that, haha!
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  • From belillama on July 11, 2008
    WHY!!! i hope Zane makes Pansy's life hell. so she gets sick of him and gives him back to Draco. i'm sooo sad but thank you for not killing him. I still hope that Draco and Hermione confess their feelings.

    Thank you for updating so soon i love this story and i check it everyday to see if its updated i've read your other ones too and i like them too but this is the best i think. :B
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  • From miahdrake on July 11, 2008
    OMG!
    Zane cannot go with Pansy! This chapter was heartbreaking! And now I simply cannot wait until the next chapter when, hopefully, things will get better!

    Great fic and great update, again. :)
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  • From Ellanath on July 11, 2008
    Oh my gosh I am sobbing! He can't stay there. He just can't. There is no doubt in my mind that this episode will bring Hermione and Draco closer together and by gosh I hope they say "I love you" to each other and put their heads together and go get Zane!!!
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  • From ANON - Donavon on July 11, 2008
    Please no, don't let Zane suffer because Draco and Hermione didn
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  • From ANON - Alle on July 11, 2008
    that BITCH!! i really hope that zane gives her hell.
    i cant believe that they just took him like that... so not fair.
    draco has to get back to hermione... i think he loves her way more than he realizes, and she needs him.
    harry should just get over himself and use his influence, because its for a good cause, right?
    balise should be tied up for not doing anything he could to help his best friend.
    GREAT JOB! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Donavonee on July 11, 2008
    NO! You cannot let this happen. Please do not allow Pancy to have custody of Zane. The little wizard is already very upset. H
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