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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From Ellanath on June 30, 2008
    Oh Shit! Oh no no no no no. This can not happen! He's too little. Too cute. To......to......gah!!! The cliff hanger is going to kill me until the next chapter!!! You little heathen * I mean that in the nicest way*.
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  • From shelagh on June 30, 2008
    Ohhhh evil cliffee!!!!!!!!!!!! Update pronto.
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  • From Sparkykiki on June 30, 2008
    I knew that this wasn't going to be a happy chapter from the title, but OMG! Poor Zane! Now that's going to go against them and make Pansy's case stronger. :( I feel bad things on the horizon. But I loved the chapter and I love the way Narcissa has taken to Hermione. As always, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From brandnewdaydawning on June 30, 2008
    Adorable portrayal of this little boy. I love the way that they are both so sweet with the child but still snarky about each other. Cute, and well done.
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  • From brandnewdaydawning on June 30, 2008
    Nice begining. I like the way you portray Draco as passive because it's true to character.
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  • From aine17 on June 30, 2008
    Please don't keep up the suspense for too long!!

    I love this fanfic, and I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.


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  • From RyGirl824 on June 30, 2008
    No! oh no oh no oh nooooo!!! Zane!! Please, he has to be OK!! And Hermione was going to tell Draco she loved him, and just OH NOOO!!!!
    :(
    Please please don't make us wait long!!
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  • From ANON - Alle on June 30, 2008
    NO! NO! NO!
    No you can't just leave that cliffhanger! ahh!
    and little zane?!? what are you thinking? he can't DIE!
    and now hermione and draco wont ever tell each other how they really feel!!
    AHHH!!!! update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - reader on June 30, 2008
    ahhh how could you!?!?
    i was totally expecting a romantic dinner between the two love birds but no you had to put a twist to the ending! anywho i still loved the chapter. i just hope you can update soon to unravel what happens to zane.
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  • From miahdrake on June 30, 2008
    Oh my goodness!!! Okay so where to start!?! First of all I loved Donny and Oliver in this chapter, the way you've written these characters is really cute! :) And Hermione going to Narcissa and deciding to fight for Draco's love! *squee* And OMG Zane! I CANNOT wait for your next update! I adore your fic! :)
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  • From luvhp on June 30, 2008
    OMG! What an awful cliffhanger!!!!
    I was just reaching my high from the seriously fluffy storyline here and BAM, crashed right into the sidewalk with poor Zane. I do hope he's okay, I mean, come on, you can't kill the kid....right?

    Okay, so, I saw your note about Oliver's accent..I LOVE IT!! Please don't stop writing the dialect...I doona mind at all, it makes it so much easier to picture the gorgeous Scotsman! I ken you understand! :)
    I soooo wanna be Donny right about now. Seriously, the first two movies are the best just because Oliver Wood speaks in them, LOL!!!

    I like that Narcissa and Hermione are close and Narcissa gave her the kick in the pants to go after Draco.
    OMG and the chapter with Zane on the phone with Gamma and Gampa was too hilarious!! Kids are such a riot.
    Zane's meeting with the DMP was very enlightening, telling her that Pansy isn't his mummy. Just because you're blood doesn't mean you're automatically family, obviously. And yeah for Blaise snooping :)

    Fred & George, what can I say, gotta love 'em. 'You need lots of practice' LOL

    Okay, I don't know how I missed the last 3 chapters but I hope you update again soon to find out how Zane fairs....and hopefully Hermione gets up the courage to tell Draco how she feels.
    Keep it up, this is WONDERFUL!
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  • From Tassanaburrfoot on June 30, 2008
    I actually felt my heart in my throat when I read that last part. Poor Zane! Please tell me he's not dead? I can't imagine what this will do to Draco if he loses his only son. I feel horrible for all of them. I know Narcissa and Lucius are going to go crazy when they hear what's happened.
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  • From ANON - NashiraNeeko on June 30, 2008
    oh my god :O:O
    I'm really looking forward to hermiones and dracos conversation and what she planned for them, but Zane!! :O
    Please update REALLY SOON :O
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  • From ANON - Masha on June 30, 2008
    Nooooooo... This is like the worst cliffhanger in the history of cliffhangers. How could you let him fall! Why! Why! *coughs a little and takes a deep breath* Sorry, about that. Anyway... what did I wanna say... oh, yes, PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FASTER, PLEASE, PLEASE... I can't wait to see what happens...
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  • From buriedalivebylove69 on June 30, 2008
    No no no no no! You can't have little Zane die! He is to damn cute! Please update soon!
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