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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From ANON - Verie on June 30, 2008
    OMG. What happened to Zane?! Are they going to be investigated again by the DMP? Are they going to re-evaluate the custody because of that? And moreover is Hermione still going to have a chance to tell Draco how she feels? OH MY!

    This chapter is a rollercoaster of emotions, one scene I was ecstatic cause finally Hermione's going to use her Gryffindor Courage and now by the end, its a total wreck of emotions because of Zane. MY GAWD. Laying on the Floor with Blood? Shoot!

    Argh! Please update soon! Please! Please!
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  • From Larrabee on June 30, 2008
    okay... ok. O. K. This can either go two ways. Obviously he is going to be fine. Obviously. So, this can either bring Draco and Hermione together. Or it can make them bitter and angry at eachother as they try to place blame. idk. I don't know. But I am looking forward to a happy-ending. idk.
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  • From ANON - chikita_banana on June 30, 2008
    OMFG! It all went so good for them, for the custody, their lives, and then the little boy has that accident!!!
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From skydancer on June 30, 2008
    AAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!! a 'balocony-hanger"!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2008
    Oh Gawd, where do I start??? I love that Donny and Oliver are getting on so well and trust me, it's your story, you can write him and his accent any way you like (I for one, think it's perfect). And I love the way that Hermione went to Narcissa and confessed all and made up her mind to fight for Draco (as if there was any doubt) ;) And the plan to have some alone time together was just wonderfully coming along but now I feel just sick about what's happened to Zane. Now I know it's a story and he's a fictional character but I felt almost physically ill when I read the last few lines. I'm sure he'll be okay but this is not going to go well with the custody case at all and I dread to think where that will lead. A standing ovation, dear writer, that was brilliant.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 30, 2008
    oh no....what happened to Zane??? ah you left us a cliffie!!! great chapter, i a m glad hermione confided in narcissa, and i love that narcissa welcomed her with open arms. I know that Zane's accident is going to cause problems for them withthe DMP and i get the feeling that in their worry and concern they might start blaming each other for Zane grabbing the broom and going for a ride. Please update soon! This is a fantastic stiry!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on June 30, 2008
    Oh, you are horrible! That was a wonderful set-up, though. Draco leaving the broom out and Hermione being reminded to shut the balcony doors were wonderful, subtle clues. Please update soon! I'm so worried about Zane!
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  • From ANON - ameba on June 30, 2008
    OMG!!!

    you leave it in such a moment.... can wait to see what happens
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  • From 2cute2B4got10 on June 30, 2008
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU COULD YOU DO THAT TO ZANE!!

    EVIL
    YOU
    ARE
    EVIL!!!!!
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  • From Firelady112 on June 30, 2008
    Oh no! Evil, evil, evil!
    Please update soon, cliffies like that ought to be punishable by law!!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on June 30, 2008
    Fix Zane!!! Please?!
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  • From amyfeddy on June 30, 2008
    oh my, please update soon. i'd add more but i don't know what to say.
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  • From chickaboo on June 30, 2008
    Evil. That is what you are. I cannot believe you left it like this. GET BACK HERE!!! Please promise me you won't make us wait too long for an update....I can't take it!
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  • From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on June 30, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! OMFG I SWEAR IF YOU KILL ZANE OFF I'M GONNA DO SOMETHING REALLY BAD THAT I HAVE YET TO THINK OF BECAUSE ALL I COULD THINK OF RIGHT NOW IS ZANE LYING ON THE CONCRETE ALL BLEEDING AND UNCONCIOUS!!!!

    PLEASE...DON'T KILL HIM OFF!!!! :(
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  • From leValkyrie on June 30, 2008
    NO!!!!! You can't let Zane die! Come on! This is sooo going to tip the balance of the custody battle...I swear if Pansy gets him you might have some angry reviewers your hand...one moment i laughed out loud literally at was when you said the elf had on parachute pants and a bikini top...mc hammer automatically popped into my head lol...i was wondering when you were going to update this story that i love so much...Zane's my favorite he has such a cool name...awesome update and i wanna kno wut happens...please dont let pansy get custody of him tho and just when Hermione was soo close!
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