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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From chickaboo on September 04, 2008
    What a great story! Thank you so much for sharing it! I have to say that I still hate Pansy but, at least he's going to get to know her as an adult and that way he can make the decision as to whether or not he wants to have her in his life. Anyway, thanks again for sharing your story, I loved it!
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  • From ANON - :D on September 04, 2008
    love the end. made me feel bad for Pansy.
    :D
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  • From ilke on September 04, 2008
    What a superb story! You really did an excellent job. Congratulations!
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  • From angelwhisper526 on September 03, 2008
    First of all, thank you for redeeming Pansy in the end. I know that she's a bitch, but as a mother myself, I find it hard to stomach when even stories don't love their babies. That aside, I love the way that you ended this. It was beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Surrie on September 03, 2008
    UM...

    cliche...

    the ending could have been a lot better if focused on hermione and draco instead of pansy and zane.
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  • From Sparkykiki on September 03, 2008
    What a nice ending! I'm glad to see that Pansy has changed a bit. Can't wait for the sequel. :D
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  • From ANON - Bryony on September 03, 2008
    Oh this story was amazing, I loved every minute of it. I have to say I loved that you put them in Portsmouth, being from there myself, and am curious as to why you chose to put them there? I look forward to the sequel =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2008
    It has been a great pleasure to read every sentence of this wonderful story, a true masterpiece. And I love how at the end you gave Pansy a chance at redemption. It takes some people a long time to realise the preciousness of what they could have had. You can easily see that Zane made the transition from being a good kid to becoming a thoughtful young wizard and is well on the way to becoming a great man. Well done on all counts!! I look forward to your next grand adventure. :)
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on September 03, 2008
    Wow what an ending.
    I'll have to tell hubby about this story now that it is complete.
    Good job.
    I think Draco is being overprotective where Hermione's feelings are concerned not that he doesn't have the right to be but I think she has been waiting for the other shoe to drop and now it has.
    Did Donnie marry Woodie?
    Is Wolf's other side making him so so sleepy?
    Waiting for more.
    Patty
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  • From sweething10 on September 03, 2008
    Oh, I love the epilogue! I was so sad to see this story end, but now you've given me something to look forward too. It surprises me a bit that Pansy would sound so apologetic, but growing older (and wiser hopefully) does that to a person I would hope.
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  • From ANON - koneko-chan on September 03, 2008
    Aww! What a great ending! I love it :) I'm sad the story is over, but you did a wonderful job with it.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 03, 2008
    This was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!
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  • From leValkyrie on September 03, 2008
    its the end!!!!!!! tear it was such a wonderful story i must admit...i cant wait to read the sequel...i wonder whats going to go down with him and pansy
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  • From genna on September 03, 2008
    It was really quaint especially with the ending. Zane wanted to know why.

    I liked your story.
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  • From Eilisbelle on September 03, 2008
    very, very very good ending. You really wrapped things up nicely, and left a good opening for the sequel. Awesome story!!!!
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