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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From ANON - danielle on February 25, 2008
    Normally I don't try to suggest ideas for other people's stories. But every once in awhile I read a story that actually gets my mind thinking about things that could happen if only. So my crazy brain wanted to share the idea of them having a pool party. I don't know if you mentioned when Zane's birthday was but isn't Draco's in the summer. This could give Donnie a chance to get hermione to show off a bit and possibly wear a bikini of some kind. Possible situation could occur where Zane trys to step in and stop someone from hurting hermione either accidently or on purpose. Giving Draco a chance to step in himself and save hermione from someone or something. You can ignore this suggestion which is cool or if you want me to explain more I would be more than happy to. I hope to see more of your story soon! Keep up the good work.
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  • From Nikkilicious on February 25, 2008
    Aww yay another chapter! Haha, it was so funny when you were talking about the showers. Aww, so cute. Hehe. And wow, that DMP lady (right?) was a meany! Grrr. They are good parents. I'm so glad that Draco got rid of the Death Eater toys. I would have reacted like Hermione did. WHO THE HELL MAKES DEATH EATER TOYS?! Lol. We might as well start making Hitler Action figures. :P

    I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for more dear.
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  • From ANON - chikita_banana on February 24, 2008
    more more more!!! update soon! i love this story...
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  • From Sparkykiki on February 24, 2008
    Another wonderful chapter. I've very intrigued by the hint of a dark past with Hermione and the Death Eaters. Keep up the great work!
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  • From miakitty on February 24, 2008
    yea,u need to add more angst and sex stuff.
    draco cant wait that long from shaging hermione
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  • From ANON - Terry Moon on February 23, 2008
    I really do like this story very much. The progress in ther relationship is slow but constant, and that's certainly good and something that I trully appreciate for its not a hasty and rushed advance. The pace you are setting it's perfect. Good chapter. I hated that woman!
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  • From ANON - superscar on February 23, 2008
    I *really* enjoy this story, I love the sexual tension between them and Draco is so sexy in how much he loves Zane. Zane is so adorable too, I absolutely love everything that comes out of his mouth, it's hilarious. I stayed up WAY too late reading this and I've totally fucked my schedule, but it was a great time and I hope to read more soon.

    Thanks for writing!
    scar
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  • From mhaj78 on February 23, 2008
    So the visits begin! I can't wait for them to fall in love. :) Such a romantic at heart.

    I do enjoy seeing Draco as a father--and it's such a natural role to see Hermione as both a teacher and a step-mom. She fills the roles well! And geez, you write it well, too. :)

    Looking forward to the update--you're on my list that I check daily for an update!! :)
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  • From ANON - Jael on February 23, 2008
    I am loving this story, thanks for the latest chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sabine on February 23, 2008
    Great story!
    Can't wait for the next chapter(s) !!!!!!!
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  • From ocard on February 23, 2008
    omg that was soo sweet and omg can they please make out for real now??
    haha im dying with the sexual tension here!!

    thanks for the update ^_^ !!!

    xoxoxoxoxoxo
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  • From ANON - alyson on February 23, 2008
    Please update really soon.
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  • From ANON - FIona on February 22, 2008
    Ahhh why does it feel like I got to the end so quickly!? =( I'm craving to read more! lol.. ^_^
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  • From Camryn31 on February 22, 2008
    aaah this is wonderful
    i love the draco of this story!!!!
    update asap!!!! great chapters
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  • From ANON - Brandi on February 22, 2008
    I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next installment.
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