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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm
  • From LeftInnocenceBehind on February 21, 2008
    Teehee - the long wait was almost worth it ^_^
    And I loooooooove how you sort of mesh Zane's thought process with Hermione's and Draco's, that they sometimes think childish irrational things too (ie, what to do to that evil twat of an inspector lady haha)
    Hopefully the next chapter won't have so long of a wait! :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2008
    Please, write more! I started reading your story and got addicted, it's so cute but not all too fluffy.
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  • From Firelady112 on February 21, 2008
    Oh, I love it! I'm so glad you finally updated. Can't wait for more! Things just HAVE to get better between Hermione and Draco! And Zane is cuter every day! =)
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  • From MisdirectedPassion on February 21, 2008
    WEENIE!!!!!!!
    :D

    Awesome, as per usual! I was here, kicking my own Texas-born bum in frustration every time the inspector twisted something into something it wasn't. Ugh. Why is it that those people are always such buttheads?

    . . . . .We'll never know.

    I haven't reviewed on any of the sites yet (though I've told you how much I love all the stories of yours that I've read) so let me geyt everything off my chest.

    [1] I love all the sarcastic little thoughts you put in the character's heads.

    [2] I absolutely adore Zane (and Wolf, of course). He brings a light-hearted feel to the story and always makes me giggle uncontrollably. In public. :)

    [3] Though you've changed the Malfoy Seniors a bit, it works and I love it. Narcissa is cool as the other side of my pillow (and sweet as cotton andy, if you wanted another simile, haha.) and Lucius' change of heart and self control is admirable.

    [4] The plot itself is excellent. I first looked at it and thought 'Oh, nobody could do that kind of thing well'. I was WRONNNNNG!!!!! You, my dear Weenie, are amazing and I love you mucho, mucho, mucho.



    That's all for now. I would have reviewed on GrangerEnchanted (because my name is messd up on here and I'm too lazy to go fix it), but my sidekick wouldn't let me. So I'm doing it here.

    Okayyyy! Later, Weenie!




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  • From HannaDelacour on February 21, 2008
    Another wonderful chapter... I'm so greedy I want more lol... I want to leave a worthwhile review with some insight but at this point in time it's just so wonderful all I want to do is rave I love it, over and over again. I guess at this moment that will just have suffice. I'll think of something inspirational to say later. I love it!
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  • From breannakristine on February 21, 2008
    Absolutely fantastic! This is one of my favorite stories!!!
    I can't wait until the next chapter comes. Your doing a great job,
    keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - ameba on February 21, 2008

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  • From Juls52 on February 21, 2008
    OMG i'm sooo fully loving this fic!! i love how they make a unconventional family!! its soo cute!!!! & the way they argue!! omg its explosive!!! i can't wait 4 u 2 review again!!!
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  • From mariecke22 on February 21, 2008
    ok i will forgive you this time for the long wait. But only because the update was bloody brilliant! But please dont wait so long anymore to post a new chapter!
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  • From Malfoysplaymate on February 21, 2008
    Yay, Finally. I think I was going through withdrawals. Awesome update! cant wait for the next bit.
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  • From skydancer on February 21, 2008
    okaaaay...okay... your forgiven.....
    and, yes....why is it that "child care professionals" never seem to have their own subjects/ I mean children?
    hey, I can say that...three friends and one sibling are all ECE teachers and none have kids, and one has a cat!
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  • From chickaboo on February 21, 2008
    *Gasp* Darest I believe mine eyes? An update? Yay 'tis true! Tis an update! LOL Just kidding, had to tease you at least little bit....hehehe. Anyway, this was a great update. It kind of became obvious to me in this chapter that Draco and Hermione are really going to have to try to get along better due to the fact that they seem to have forgotten that Zane has an incredible knack for saying exactly what they don't want him so say exactly when they don't want him to say it...as most young children are wont to do. And I almost had a heart attack because when the DMP lady showed up the first thing that I though was, 'Oh no! They're beds aren't put together, and she is so going to find that odd!'. Imagine my relief that she just kept it to a short albeit tense and slightly degrading interview. Draco and Hermione are going to have to do something quick because with random whenever-they-feel-like-it visits rather then scheduled appointments of the DMP they're gonna get busted. Anyway, wonderful update, I was SO excited to see one, I can't wait for more and I really really really hope you update again soon!
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  • From myangeldraco on February 21, 2008
    I forgot to ask are you a fan of Gigi D'Agostino?!. I just picked it up from Pansy's new surname!
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  • From myangeldraco on February 21, 2008
    I am forever grateful to you for updating!! for a slight moment at the beginning of the story I thought little Zane wouldn't be mentioned, but then up he popped. He's so cute!!! That was funny when Hermione caught him jumping on the bed lol x I really really REALLY! can't wait for your next update......so get typing!!!!!lol xx

    ps. Thanks for the email x
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  • From ANON - 2cute2B4got10 on February 21, 2008
    OK next chapter!! That was tooo cute to end right there!! i need more !!!!

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