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Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

By : AnasellaEmm

From STORM89 on August 19, 2008
dude please update soon. i have been looking for a story like this for years, its soo good. so please update soon
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From smmz79 on August 15, 2008
AAAAHHHHH you left us on a cliffie how dare you.... great chap i love this story... i had a funny feeling something was going to happen everything seemed to be working out for draco and hermione.... i love fred and george and i am sure that hermione and draco would appreciate them being there for zane when he needed someone familiar besides pansy.... OMG no hair... everlasting dungbombs.... and now mirror they are great pansy will be going nuts.... she will be begging draco to take zane back in no time.... i love that donny and oliver are in love that is so sweet... great chap update soon i just have to know if hermione is pg!!!!!!
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From mitsuthenekogirl on August 15, 2008
o.o cliffhanger?! AAAAHHHH
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From miakitty on August 15, 2008
IS IT BLUE OR PINK????????
OH GOD PLEASE MAKE IT PINK!!!!!!!!
I'M SURE ZANE WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A SISTER OR BROTHER
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From ANON - August Madison on August 14, 2008
Oh, and completely agree with Chelsea, just had my wisdom teeth removed, and I'm not above guilt trips. Oh, the pain of the pulling the teeth out of my jaw and not knowing if she's pregnant or not! How do I live? Must I carry on through this mortal coil without knowing and having throbbing jaws? Noooooooooo!
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From ANON - August Madison on August 14, 2008
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Eeeevvvvviiiillll! What color? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Going crazy! Can't even type right! I love how Draco tells her that he hasn't told her, though. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! What color?! And how's the mirror game going to make Pansy lose her mind? Totally agree that I would want the man to be outside the bathroom waiting but wouldn't want him to listen to me going. And love the expansion of the Zabini/Westin relationship. I'm glad you went into detail on her looks. Not what I had pictured, but much more like a person with whom I'd like to see Blaise. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Slowly progressing into mental dimensia!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Blue, pink, blue, pink, maybe green since that's Zane's favorit..... see! Must know! :)
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From ANON - Chelsea on August 13, 2008
oh come on!!! you cant just leave it there!!! thats just cruel!!!! i want to know!!! please...as a get well soon gift (just had surgery and it sucks) update really soon!!! i may not be able to read it right away...my computer fried...and im on my brothers now...i stole it while hes gone lol...but please update!!!! im dying to know if she pregnant and how zanes copying act goes lol
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From ANON - Puppet Pui on August 13, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Hahahah. Oh my! Had me on edge and now I have to wait. Nice; real neck-breaking cliffy you've left us with. Now I have to ponder and mull over the questions of whether or not it's blue or pink.

Ciao! I'll be checking for the answer and the next Pansy episode!
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From hppyflwr on August 12, 2008
OMG you are so baaaaaaaaaaaaad! I cannot believe (actually I can you've done it before) you left us hanging this way. I am sooooo looking forward to your next chapter.

This is better that chocolate and Draco together and that is saying something.

hppyflwr
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From kcstrata on August 12, 2008
Cliffy?! I cliffy?! This is hardly fair! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the answer! :) Write soon, write quick! Can't wait to hear the verdict! Are Fred and George going to give Pansy the solutions to her problems or are they going to make her pay for them? What's going to happen to that part of the story? Are they going to be revealed as the instigators? It all sounds terribly mean if they don't provide the solution as well but that still has me indecisive. Keep it up, my dear! I love it!
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From ANON - Jesustheatheist on August 12, 2008
Ahhhhhhh!!!! Cliffhanger, you are a cruel cruel mistress indeed!
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From SynneR on August 12, 2008
OMG how dare you leave the story at that!! ahhhhhh!! you need to update! T_T
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From ocard on August 12, 2008
OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE IMMIDEATLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - SLori on August 11, 2008
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!
You are so mean, bad write, very bad bad writer!!!! Im going to slap ur wrist or maybe ur fingers!!! Just kidding!!!
Great cliffy!!
This is one of the greatest stories I have ever read... if not the BEST!
Hope u update VERY SOON!!!

Cant wait to read the end and the new fic, featuring Zane!! Ur awsome!!!!

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From ANON - mm4ever on August 11, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT TO KNOW IF SHE IS PREGNANT OR NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

I really want to know what happens with zane and what hermione and draco do when they find out they have a fifth person for the trial!!!! They better get zane back!!!!!!
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