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Reviews for The Safe-House Plan

By : nijuichifan
  • From Silkylove on November 20, 2007
    wow, after a while that conversation with twinky got soo confussing lol. Man i hope i can keep up. Lol. I really enjoy the plot of the story, can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From desolate1980 on November 15, 2007
    I'm a sucker for a good creature story, and it's hard to find good ones. I really enjoyed the start of your story. I like how you just kind of jumped into the story feet first so to speak, and I like the description of the house. you said you were looking for a beta reader, and someone mentioned this one website on a community in livejournal the other day, don't ask me why I remembered it when I don't write anything but i hope it helps you. here ya go: http://www.perfectimagination.co.uk/

    ohh and can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From lpgranger13 on November 14, 2007
    Oops. realized that I said definatly=defiantly, but it really is definitely, and also alot=a lot. Hope to hear from you soon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 14, 2007
    Sounds wonderful! Sooo need chapter 3! Dumbledore that sly old fox has been out Slytherin.
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  • From NightLo on November 12, 2007
    So...Harry is something that we did not know, would you kindly introduce them to us?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2007
    Spell check or Right click the word you feel is wrong and word should give you options for correcting them. by the way story seems interesting hope you will continue I like creature stories so this seems so nice to see.
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  • From pontaloon on November 12, 2007
    Hurry and update!!! i want to see Harry's wings!!!
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  • From dracoharry4life on November 12, 2007
    Nice! Thanks for the update. Love creature fics. Can't wait for Draco.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 11, 2007
    ooooh wow more!
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  • From lpgranger13 on November 11, 2007
    I'm back! Hopefully this time I can finish. Oh, by the way, these are just mistakes for the second chapter, if you want me to look over the prologue and the first chapter I would be happy to. I think I'm starting from where I left off, but did you really mean Dumbledork or Dumbledore, also there was a word earlier the Phynix account, did you mean Phoenix. Okay, starting again. deffinatly=defiantly, extremly=extremely, inocent=innocent, torchure=torture, madmans= madman
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  • From alma on November 11, 2007
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 11, 2007
    Good chapter.
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  • From lpgranger13 on November 11, 2007
    My email is lydiapenfold13@yahoo.com
    Words that I found misspelled and their correct spelling in order are....Gringots=Gringotts(I'm pretty sure it has another t),decieded=decided, do you mean shrank or shrunk, aniversary=anniversary, payed=paid, wispered=whispered, recieve=receive, Gallions=Galleons (done a couple of times), immedietly=immediately (done twice), recieved=received, Scottland=Scotland, controling=controlling (done twice), intrest=interest, Quiditch=Quidditch (only happened once),Britan=Britain, acount=account, transfered=transferred, genuinly=genuinely, suprised=surprised (done twice), Griffindor=Gryffindor, comming=coming, certian=certain, previesly=previously. Not done yet, but will come back in a bit, computer has decided to be stupid and won't let me do some stuff. Have to restart.
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  • From kawanale on November 11, 2007
    Hi, this looks like a good start to a story. I haven't come across a Harry as a Bivnara story so I am interested in how you will be taking this story forward. :-)
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  • From RRW on November 11, 2007
    Now this is getting good! I guess the next chapter would be the inheritence, but how about some Draco action...please...pretty please?
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