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Reviews for You Change My Mind

By : AkashaTheKitty
  • From mariecke22 on December 05, 2007
    ok there absolutely has to be a sequel. You can't be that cruell??
    Loved the story and i so want to reed more!! Please consider ..
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 27, 2007
    Yea, you are pretty mean lol but I love Silencio!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on November 24, 2007
    Ooh that was good. I was thinking, how the hell is she going to wrap up the story in only one chapter when they are so short. I should have known better, I am repentant. I won't pester you for a sequel but I hope you do write one.
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  • From Damiana on November 23, 2007
    Awesome!

    So sneaky and evil!
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  • From wudelfin on November 20, 2007
    perfect ending..
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  • From Poison4Girl on November 20, 2007
    I liked your ending. You left the story open with so many possibilities for evil. But not too open that I feel like it is unfinished.

    Sometimes challenges are just what we need :)
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  • From ANON - fudgearound on November 19, 2007
    Oy! What a twisted ending! Okay that's it, you owe all of us at least one fic with a nice happy ending. Haha! This fic is so well-written, im totally loving every chapter. Good Job!
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  • From myangeldraco on November 19, 2007
    I've got a feeling Draco and Hermione fic's are not your cup of tea and that is why you write horrible ending's for them. Regardless of all that (and being a huge fan of HG/DM fic's) I have to say that (apart from the last paragraph lol x), your stories are amazing. I just wish you could give them an happy ending for once, but alas that is not your style. I bet if you did do one with a happy ending but loads of shitty things happening throughout it could still have your style and be everyone's favourite story. Hope one day you consider and I'd love to know your favourite pairing, I'd be really shocked if it was DM/HG though!! thanks for the entertainment, I'd never tell a writer to change their story but I'll imagine you did an happy ending, they walked of together. The End lol xx
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  • From on November 19, 2007
    You are evil evil evil!!! I just love that ending and the story on the whole. Great twist!!!
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  • From AModernMyth on November 19, 2007
    that was soooooooo fricken awesome!!! omg.. i loved the ending. at first iw as all 'aawwww draco you puppy, you' then i read the last line and i wa slike 'YEEESSs!!!!' HA HA loved it soooo much!
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  • From Adamei on November 19, 2007
    Wow, this was really great. The ending was fit although not particularilly satisfying. One wonders however if Hermione really buys Dracos Big Show, his change of heart in the forrest felt a bit..quick? Maybe she's just too trusting for her own good. And in looove.
    Oh btw, the torturing-the-pregnant-girl -bit was truly chilling, I actually got bit nauseous when reading it, you can write very powerfully.
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  • From ANON - Jasmin on November 19, 2007
    Well, I don't know if I should love the end or hate it. It's just so....neutral. At least Hermione might be happy with him, initially. And well, he seemed to have feelings for her, too, but it might be difficult for him to love and use her. Poor Draco, he will be having a rough time!
    Another really great and breathtaking story. Thank you for sharing!!! You're a genius!

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  • From ichiruki on November 19, 2007
    So ok, right then, no one's died....yet! LOL! (warning I'm feeling ridiculously silly as I write)

    So he's a spy then? Hmmmm, interesting, just to let you know I will need more story line before I can reach a conclusion about what I think, yessss that much is apparent, obviously I will need more story to make an "informed" opinion.

    Oh, but wait, I'm waiting on another sequel about this one story, what was it called...oh bother, the name escapes me...I'm so kidding of course! I just saw that "THIS IS NOT THE SEQUEL DAMNIT!" portion to your disclaimer today and snickered...being bothered by that are you? I don't know if it was always there, but seeing for the first time today was funny. You know funny-ha-ha ironic, not Alanis ironic.

    If, however, you choose to someday write a story with all or some of the following:

    -a few glistening dew drops
    -a bed of roses (dethorned naturally-not such the loathsome task of old when one has magic on one's side you know)
    -two gay unicorns
    -smattering of gold paint and glitter
    -vulgar cotton candy clouds
    -glorious rainbows and other strange but romantic weather phenomenon
    -Other "glorious" things related to earth's rotational patterns like sunsets or conversely sunrises
    -a litter of puppies
    -taffeta, ribbons and lace -oh my!-
    -fuzzy polar bear cubs playing with equally cute fuzzy baby seals (that aren't bloodied eaten carcasses that is)
    -basket of furry kittens (preferably not drowned)
    -a singing forest creature moment (that doesn't result in hunting of said forest animals afterwards)
    - running in fields via the old slow motion romantic music bit

    I bet, and this is just conjecture on my part, that maybe, just maybe people would stop asking for sequels...but I tend to think it wouldn't make a difference because it's never enough is it?

    I read a story sort of like this once, ok maybe it didn't have the polar bears cubs and baby seals bit or the two gay unicorns but if it did it might have actually been funny, (hades' balls why I did it, torture maybe?) but to protect the innocent and naive I shall nobly refrain from "going there" but I wanted to make a point about what torture is, the list above-yeah that's torture.

    My-numbing-strap-you-to-a-chair-tape-your-eye-lids-open-while-you-are-forced-to-watch-someone--spit-in-your-bowl-of-captain-crunch-and-
    then-force-feed-it-to-you-torture. It's all wrongness like bathroom sex (wait that's my next story-so scratch that not wrong like bathroom sex) corn holing (the sport) and littering (as in trashing with wrappers and general refuse) .

    All the lovely twists that actually make someone want to read the next chapter or clamor for a sequel lol, yeah not so much! Godspeed moon kat and keep on writin'

    to see mooncat reference please check out this very adorable kitteh:
    http://icanhascheezburger.com/2007/05/13/god-speed-moon-cat/
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  • From ElizabethMac on November 18, 2007
    I actually really liked how your story ended. It was a complete surprise and i'm glad that I didn't see that comeing, i'm glad that it wasn't all puppy dog and rainbows lol .. i think if it had ended different, it wouldn't have felt right .. this ending suits the story very well. Good job. it was a really good story.

    Mac.

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  • From WriterChick1990 on November 18, 2007
    ur mean making us think its gonna be all loveing and happy then throwing in the last paragraph wich makes u brilliant so i just love you for it grrr argh
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