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By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From gorgeousbowneyes on November 12, 2007
    Ahhhhhhh! Het! I must admit, this is the first time in oh .... a good year now? That I have read het. Slash girl normally. BUT I decided to give it a try, coz I was like how do u get N/C in Draco/Hermione?? But I suppose I've been living in my slash world too much and keep thinking that all het is fluffy and happy which it isn't necessarily. But otherwise a good job. I liked the end few sentences, as he had put in a fertility potion to make her pregnant. I was first reading it and I was like BIRTH CONTROL doesn't matter its ur first time u could get PREGNANT!!! But no ... that's what he wanted all along.
    Anyway, well done!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From EtherealSpring on November 12, 2007
    Good story. Has sequel potential.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 11, 2007
    omg hes so slick the drunk bastard! i loved it!
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  • From titfortat on November 11, 2007
    I really enjoyed this story. I have to say I thibk there is more to this story than just a one shot. But if you decide that there is not then it still a really enjoyable read.

    I have to say that I do really enjoy your storys my fav is after midnight. And I hope one day you decide to finish it cus its a great piece of work
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2007
    wow totally wasnt expecting him to do that
    but i liked this story alot
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