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By : Diayma
  • From on February 08, 2008
    I just started this story and want to know more about them and this world you created.
    Please email me updates atpoohnation74@yahoo.com thank you.
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  • From Maybe on December 30, 2007
    Just a review to let you know I'm still waiting and hoping ;-)
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  • From alma on November 16, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From lkm40 on November 15, 2007
    You said in Chapter 3 that Mist killed Oliver while Barty Jr. was away--leaving blood all over the room. So, that being the case, Oliver cannot come back unless there's a necromancer around somewhere?
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  • From Althea on November 15, 2007
    Another great chapter! hahaha, I bet that that's not the only surprise Draco and Severus are in for! As for the pairs... Blaise/Charlie or Blaise/Bill (or both^^), and Percy/Barty Jr. (they sound good together), and then just for a twist, Regulus/Neville... and I thought that you had said that Oliver had died already because Mist killed him... but if not then I guess he could go with Regulus/Neville... and I thought that Mist was married to Regulus but maybe Neville (and Oliver) could be his slaves... and he ends up liking them more then Mist.... maybe. Anyways, awesome job, keep writing more yummies!
    ~Misery
    (could you e-mail when you up-date? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com)
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  • From DarkGothic on November 15, 2007
    wow i love your story. Just one thing had me curious, if Severus is deaf and mute then how was the bombshell dropped on him? Unless he read Harry's lips and Draco didn't mouth out the last part, just thought it. Am i being to analytical?
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  • From anniea on November 15, 2007
    wow oh wow and um where was i?.......WWWWWWOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!! so far it is amazing. when you update could you email me to let me know that this amazing story has been updated? if so then thank you and if not....oh well. update soon *kisses*
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  • From Maybe on November 15, 2007
    An update again. That's great. I understand you can't keep that up.
    I love your writing, but the reaction of Severus at the screams in the forest (ch.2) and at the introduction of Harry (ch.3) is strange (explaining the earlier communication between Draco and Severus with lipreading is possible). Isn't Severus deaf? I ask this because I find him being deaf, mute, trapped within himself (and partly broken?) interesting (a lot even) but should be consisting.
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  • From Hambares on November 15, 2007
    As long as thwe non-negotiable pairs stay the same, I don't care who else is paired. Just update soon. I want action! ;)
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  • From on November 14, 2007
    i love it
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  • From alma on November 14, 2007
    good chapter!!!!
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  • From Maybe on November 14, 2007
    An update so soon! That's great. Love to read more, especially what happened to poor severus (my favorite character) and Draco between tmhose twon months.
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  • From Jan on November 13, 2007
    OMG! I love this story!!! ^_^

    I especially like the fact that in the book Hermione disliked the fact, that house elves were treated like slaves, and you, with your brilliant mind twisted it, and made her a princess of a kingdom that loves to have humans as slaves. He he... Love it.

    Please Update Chapter 3 Soon. ^_~
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  • From DarkGothic on November 13, 2007
    wow i like this story a lot. i've never seen anything like it. I hope you update soon. oh and btw it's blonde but it can be spelled either way. I think blond was made b/c people were too lazy to put the e at the end XD
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  • From Hambares on November 13, 2007
    I like your story. I am looking forward to more to see what will happen
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