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Reviews for Forbidden Union

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  • From ANON - sess18 on April 07, 2011
    I love this story. I am soo HOOK. PLease update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sammy on March 30, 2011
    This is an amazing story, please email me when you update!

    Sammy
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  • From Jan on March 30, 2011
    OMG!!!! I absolutely love this story!!! It's so bloody perfect, at first I didn't like the idea of Draco getting merry to Carla, thought she would be bad for him, but she's not, she's good and caring and she's making him into a better man and not a cardboard copy of his cowardly father. However this does not mean that I don't want them to slip up cause I do, I really really want it to end with Harry and Draco together... maybe you could make one of the Weasley's to fall in love with her or something like that?

    Please update chapter 17 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From bloodshound on March 29, 2011
    she's toast isn't she.
    dammit and she was cool too.
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  • From magentasouth on December 20, 2010
    I hope you're going to continue this. I was quite drawn into it. You write well!
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  • From SashaMinx on October 30, 2010
    Enjoyed reading this story so far. I am intrigued as to how it will all work out. Carla's health is not a good sign with the birth so near.

    Hoping you will update soon :)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 03, 2010
    Draco a supportive father, a creature of the night, and a love interest of Harry's? a seldom path walked. Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you can.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 03, 2010
    Holy moly!!! Really? Sooooo need chapter 14!!!
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 25, 2010
    Wow. Can't wait to read more. The "&" instead of regular and proper "and" in the first paragraph looked childish and maybe a little illiterate. I would change that to make it read smoother and look more presentable.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 25, 2010
    this story is unfolding like a flower in bloom. keep up the good work
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 25, 2010
    talking to simple cat? That's a new talent
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 24, 2010
    When does he get found out and who will he feed from? I just remembered in a previous chapter in a sex scene between Blaise and Draco there was a really long paragraph. It should be cut. It was so thick I just skimmed it. You may want to cut it in half to make it easier on the reader's eyes.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 24, 2010
    I'll be. The plot thickens.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 23, 2010
    Severus showing concern for a fellow Slytherin! How pleasant of him.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 23, 2010
    Nice sex scene.
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