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Reviews for A New Family For Harry

By : shadygrl
  • From LytenaKye on December 13, 2007
    Hi, I really like your story and I can't wait for an update. By the way if you want more reviewers I would suggest you open the review options to the general public.
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  • From Jilliane on December 06, 2007
    I started reading this story right after you first posted it and had only a few chapters, but now I've come back and read through the whole thing to date again. Lucius/Harry is one of my favourite pairings, but I wasn't sure how I was going to like a Lucius/childHarry pairing. Having read through the entire story so far, all I can say is that I can't wait for more, no matter how wrong Lucius lusting after a child may be. I like it that Lucius isn't completely perverted and simply rapes and abuses a child Harry, that he's maintaining some measure of control and consideration for Harry. He at least realises that Harry is too young to know what it is that he wants. Even though this story is rather AU (I think that's the term) everybody is in character, especially Draco...you've depicted the spoiled brat he is very well and humourously. Although I felt sorry for poor Severus' drunken state being taken advantage of, I thought it very clever that you portrayed that slightly Slytherin aspect of Harry, that he could be rather calculating;...innocently calculating, if that makes sense. I like it that Lucius stopped Harry from leading Severus further along a dangerous road, and that he explained to Harry why he was going to be spanked although I somehow think Harry isn't going to mind it so much. I like it that you keep Lucius in particular in character, but that you've also given him some humanity. It would have been very easy for you to have him coldly mistreat and abuse Harry after gaining his trust, but you've chosen another direction. This story is just exceptionally well written, so well written in fact, that it's easy to overlook it's a story about a grown man sexually attracted to a little boy, reducing the squick factor to almost nil. I'm adding this story to my recommended reading list. You're doing a fantastic job and I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From Leentjef on December 05, 2007
    this was very very good keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Lucifoy on December 04, 2007
    wow, this fic feels sooo diffrent, like kinda shota but with some kind of... moral reastrictions on Lucius, i love this innocent-yet-sly Harry, i
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  • From alma on December 04, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From Phreakdom on December 04, 2007
    That was great. I think you stayed very true to the characters in their reactions. It's obvious that while Harry knows he wants something from Lucius he's not quite mature enough to understand just what that is and what it entails. It seemed like his actions were really those of a child testing the waters to see just how far he could push before he got his way. And I think it's good that he didn't get exactly what he wanted right away. Poor Severus though, drunk and aroused. I just wonder how Harry will react to being punished.
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  • From shey on December 04, 2007
    Oh a spanking, kinky! great chapter!
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  • From alleycat88 on December 04, 2007
    YES! Bad Harry...needs a spanking! Love it! Please update soon!

    Drooling over spanking scene,

    *Lilith*
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  • From Jan on December 04, 2007
    Glad to see that Severus is going to live to see another day. Poor little Harry is going to get a spanking.

    Please update chapter 15 soon. ^_^
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  • From Lothirielwen on December 03, 2007
    Wonder if Harry will get his way now......
    Can't wait to read more!!!

    *GUH* So yummy
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  • From Leentjef on December 02, 2007
    THIS WAS VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From on December 01, 2007
    JEALOUS MUCH!
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  • From EnvyButterfly on December 01, 2007
    Oh dear. Poor Severus - drunk and aroused. Not a good combination. lol Erotic though. Will Lucius 'punish' Harry?
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  • From Faschmer on November 30, 2007
    Dun dun dun! OMG That was a really evil cliffie!! Really Harry is quite the little minx isn't he? He was rather taking advantage of Severus' drunken state... I really like your story, though I am rather unsure if I should be fascinated or squicked by Harry/Lucius while Harry is still a kid. Though I am leaning towards fascinated ;) Your story is rather unique, and I really like it. Still feeling sorry for Severus though, please don't let Lucius and Severus ruin their friendship because of this... After all Severus was rather drunk. Anyways looking forward to your next update =) hugs and kisses MM
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  • From alma on November 30, 2007
    good chapter.
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