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Reviews for A New Family For Harry

By : shadygrl
  • From Endymia on November 20, 2007
    I love your story. It is so cute. I haven't read chan for a while, but you got me hooked again. I really like the way you portrait the characters and of course Lucius struggle against his own feelings is quite interessting to watch. I wonder how long he can keep restisting now that he saw Draco's and Harry's little show. Please update soon.
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  • From hkortekaas on November 20, 2007
    Yay, I love it when you update a few chapters at a time. I'm glad Lucius doesn't seem to be attracted to Draco, it seems he was more turned on by what his son was doing to Harry than Draco himself. Looking forward to more Lucius/Harry interaction, it's so hot.
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  • From liza on November 20, 2007
    i found this update intriguing and promising. again, i love how snobby and yet, completely normal the malfoys come across. harry's adjustments to the home and family and their adjustment to him was told with just enough detail. it didn't drag nor did it skip vital details.
    i like lucius' dilemma. it feels truly organic. what he's allowing to happen is wrong and yet he feels sympathetic. a man caught by his unexpected desire for this beautiful, affection starved child thrown into his life.
    and the scene between harry and draco was oddly hot and yet so purely innocent. it was perfectly balanced. i really loved lucius' thoughts on whether he should stop them or take draco's place. lol
    lastly, i think the pacing is excellent. some folks wish to rush the story or fill it in with far too much and unneeded detail. this makes sense. i get where it's leading and yet, just like real life, it takes time to get there. events are spaced out and life goes as normal between them.
    so yeah, keep up the good work. i'm enjoying this.
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  • From alleycat88 on November 19, 2007
    Wow......So is that a yes? Hahahahaha....well where the hell did draco learn all that? Has he been sneaking and peeking where he shouldn't be? I need to have more darling! That was...wow...
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  • From speedie234 on November 19, 2007
    OMG! another great chapter from you.
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  • From Leentjef on November 19, 2007
    VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From alleycat88 on November 18, 2007
    Lucius is such a perv....I like it! so I was wondering will Draco join these "family activities" or is this strictly Harry/Lucius? I will love this story despite which it is but I was just curious. I love the way this is gong...Harry is soooo cute! I just love sweet, innocent, Harry! Thanks for the update it was awesome!
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  • From alma on November 18, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From speedie234 on November 18, 2007
    I absolutely LOVE this story!!
    pleasepleaseplease udate soon!!
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  • From ulla on November 17, 2007
    It's not often that I get a good laugh on aff - but after reading Draco's "I'll show him my toys tomorrow. He can watch me play with them." I couldn't help the giggles bubble forward.

    It was such perfect dialogue from a spoiled, only child.

    And oooer that kiss and it's effect on Lucius - very intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From alma on November 16, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From Melissa1026 on November 15, 2007
    WOW GREAT START! I love Lucius and Harry! Your take on Draco was outstanding!! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!!
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  • From shey on November 15, 2007
    Oh hun, great chapter, Draco is just as I pictured him, cute but terribly spoiled. I love how Harry thinks Lucius is nice! can't wait for ch 5.
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  • From satine1313 on November 15, 2007
    Great so far! Please update soon.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 15, 2007
    Intresting chapter great job. Please add more soon
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