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By : reirei

From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on November 28, 2007
Poor Hermione. I hope Ron doesn't really let her get used too much. Hopfully Hermione won't be broken by this.

Great updates. Looking forward to more! =D
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 28, 2007
Rei Rei, Thank You for not taking my review as a flame. I didn't think you would, but when you send something into cyberspace you never know how it will be viewed. One thing I feel that I must clarify is this: I wasn't implying that you condoned rape fics. I also realize rape in fanfic is subjective. What disturbs me might not bother others. Additionally, I realize a writer is writing to touch our emotions--ALL of them, but I just can't bring myself to read what I perceive as rape. I also realize that you placed all warnings on this fic. I had also read Soft Obsidian 74's challenge request. That request only included Ron, Harry, and Draco. I assumed (incorrectly it seems) that all the scenes covered in that warning would include them and only them with Hermione. Because I thought that, I thought making a plea to you to include only them wouldn't violate Soft's challenge which was the last thing that I wanted to do. It is HER fic, and what you write should please HER. If the fic had been exclusively the 3 wizards named in the challenge, I would have happily continued reading this fic whether they all ended up in a relationship or not. I didn't think that it was going to end up with all of them in a relationship at fic's end, but it would have been icing on the cake; so, I had to make a plug for it. Additionally, I think it would make an interesting fic to see all the boys struggle with their respective feelings for each other and Hermione within the confines of a D/s relationship. But you and Soft don't see it my way, and it is HER challenge; so, I will quietly bow out of this fic's plot and leave this as my final review. Thanks for the fun ride while it lasted.
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From reirei on November 28, 2007
Tarnished : I do not feel you are flaming my writing. I do try to work within a medium that interests myself as well as the reader. Rape is not something that can happen, when all the participants are willing. I understand your desire to see all three boys share a relationship with her, and a love affair. And I suppose I could write that, but I personally dont feel its very realistic. People get to jealous or needy or whatever. The is primarily a Challenge Fic for my buddy Soft, that details specifically that I make Ron dominant, paired with Harry or Draco if I prefer, and then whatever else I like. Soft knows me, I love angst, so it will veer in that direction. I cannot promise anything, but I do remind you that I put ALL WARNINGS, on this fic.

Hermione is a Dominant submissive. The very nature of being a submissive tends to veer towards humiliation, degradation, pushing boundaries that others would see as "rape, Gangbangs, or potentially abusive relationships". Now, whether or not I see that as healthy or good is irrelevant. It will be in my fic, because this is a Challenge Fic, designed for a certain tastebud.

As a writer it is my job to provide the reader (IMHO) with the sensations of the charachters, and motivations of others, so I can tell a story that involves you.

If Hermione feels that she is being "raped." It may a be descriptor designed to install the reader with the desperation of her emotions, that desire to stop, or push forward, etc. Forced to do something that she doesnt want, then that could be "what it feels like." but not necessarily what it is.

The nature of the challenge is to demonstrate that although Hermione is submissive she is still in control. If Hermione is not submissive than I am missing the whole point of the Challenge, I am sorry if that upsets you, but if you like, you can write a challenge detailing exactly what you like and someone may come along and write it or maybe I can pick it up, if I have time. However, first and foremost this is if not anything else, designed for Soft's request.

Thank you for reading as far as you have and I appreciate the reviews. Reirei!
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 28, 2007
I have mixed feelings about this chapter. There were things that I absolutely loved, a thing that I'm willing to keep an open mind about, and a thing that I don't want to happen at all. First, I loved the fact that Harry got some alone time with Hermione, and that, she confided in him about the spilled potion. I loved Harry's stunt with the water jet. Yummy!!! I loved the moment when Ron and Harry took her using the water jet as the third stimulation point. Again yummy!!! I like how Harry and Ron think Draco is using Hermione, and I like how Draco thinks Harry and Ron are the ones using her. And the irony is all 3 boys care about her, and she is the one using them. This brings me to the thing that I'm willing to keep an open mind about. I think that Hermione having been affected by a lust potion is an interesting revelation, but I'm still disappointed by it. I want Hermione to have genuine affection for the 3 wizards the way they seem to have for her. But, that could still happen as the fic progresses; so, I'll just keep my fingers crossed. Lastly, PLEASE don't bring any other wizards into this. Let Ron's threat be just that--a threat, or let him pull back at the last minute when he sees how much he is hurting Hermione, or let Harry or Draco rein Ron in before Ron does something he regrets. I like D/s stories. I don't like rape fics, and I feel that's where this is headed. And I'm SORRY to say this, but if this wonderful story heads in that direction, I won't be able to continue to read or review it no matter how well it's written. Bottom line. Domination is sexy. Rape sickens me to my stomach. I don't mean for my final statements to be taken as flames, but I'm afraid you may interpret them that way. PLEASE don't. I'm just trying to be honest while at the same time not being cruel.
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 27, 2007
oh yes...brillant way to start that sex scene...I love the image of hermione cleaning off Draco's fingers as foreplay...nice one. So the game is on...Ron is pissed and Draco is dropping hints...I can't believe Hermione said that only Draco makes her feel like that, was she lying or just talking in the heat of the moment or was that her heart talking? I can't wait to see what Ron is gonna do to her...Is gonna hurt her, humiliate her, and/or enlist Harry to deal out punishment? Inquiring and horny minds wanna know...lol
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From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2007
Please update!! This story is really really good and I want to see what happens between Draco and Hermione.
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 27, 2007
This was quite a yummy chapter (pun intended). Thanks for including a scene with Dobby. I love the house elves in general and Dobby in particular. I also love the reference to S.P.E.W. In the books, Hermione was at her best trying to force knit caps and such onto the house elves (heehee). I LOVE Draco getting Hermione all messy and how he offered to "clean her up"--Sigh!!! Delicious moment there!!! I do believe Ms. Granger is in denial. She is accepting Draco's sexual advances for more than the express purpose of protecting Harry and Ron from Umbridge. She wants Draco, and I fear poor Draco is also confused. He thinks Hermione doesn't want Ron to "share" her with him and Harry, but alas I think that he's wrong. Hermione wants to ride all the horses on this "merry-go-round". And who can blame her with these 3 studs. Draco was sweet to offer her a monogamous relationship; although, I HOPE she declines this offer. Goody!!! Ron is jealous again. I can't wait to see his reaction in the next chapter. And, I echo other readers' thoughts. Hermione needs some time with the third wizard in her triumvirate. In other words, please let Harry play too. This was another wonderful chapter, and I eagerly await the next one.
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From alleycat88 on November 27, 2007
Is Draco offering to let her be his?! This is hot! Man so....when will there be more harry/Hermione action? Will it be rough? Or soft...*sighs* I always imagine him to be gente...nut this side of him is good too! And Ron...well we ALL knew how he would be like! Can't wait for the next chap!
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From ANON - Sheila on November 26, 2007
i hate ron and harry, really.
i hope this ends like a dramione one :)
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From alleycat88 on November 25, 2007
Awesoe Awesome! Loved the big orgy! It was great! Please do more of that!
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 24, 2007
This is again for SoftObsidian74. Thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding I had about Ron being portrayed as a user in this fic. I thought that the purpose of this fic was to give Ron a chance to be shown as a stronger character and not just be brushed aside for Harry or Draco to claim Hermione. So, I was a bit confused by your plot idea. I (like you) think that "gingers" can be sexy. I guess that I take after my mother because my father is a redhead. I'm a brunette like Mom, but I have red and gold highlights and fair skin that sunburns easily. Both gifts from Daddy's genetic pool.

I'm glad that my enjoyment of this fic helps you to feel less "pervy". I personally don't have a problem with threesome/moresomes in fics if 3 criteria are met. The first is I must like all the characters involved in the relationship. The second rule is there must be genuine emotion amongst all participants. And finally, the sex must be consensual. All 3 of those rules have been met in this fic. I know some might debate whether Hermione was willing, but I think she wanted all 3 of them. I just think she was nervous about giving up the control to them. Once she did, she discovered that the experience was pleasurable. Had she never experienced pleasure, then, I would have deemed the story a rape fic, and I wouldn't have read any more. Again, I'm not trying to stir up trouble, but I don't like rape fics. I do like to read D/S fics. This fic is most definitely a D/S fic. It's also my fantasy fic because I've always wanted a HP fic where Harry, Ron, and Draco get to have Hermione at the same time (I guess great minds think alike--heehee). I've read Harry/Hermione/Ron and Harry/Hermione/Draco menages, but I've never read one with all 3 boys and Hermione. And thank you both IMMENSELY for this wonderful fic--Thank You for requesting it and Thank You ReiRei for writing it. You both broke new ground because I firmly believe this fic is the first of its kind. Congrats to you both!!!
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 24, 2007
Oh Tarnished I'm in total agreement with you about not short changing Ron..that was the challenge. I was just giving some suggestions about where the plot could go. You're right, Ron gets the short end of the stick a lot probably because he's a ginger....but gingers can be so fucking sexy...I also love Dark! Harry and Draco is my baby....so yea, keeping all three involved is the ultimate. Anyways, just wanted to say that it's cool you're enjoying this fic too..I don't feel like such a perv for enjoying Hermione getting stuffed like a thanksgiving turkey : )
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 23, 2007
This is for SoftObsidian74. Thank You for not being offending by my offering suggestions about how YOUR fic should proceed. I was hoping that you wouldn't be offended by me sticking my nose into this storyline. I love your ideas too except for Ron being an user. Please understand; I'm not trying to stir up trouble here, but I feel there are far too many fics where Ron gets shortchanged in favor of Draco or Harry winning Hermione. I love all 3 boys (as if that's not abundantly clear by now--heehee), and Hermione is my favorite character in the entire series. Additionally, I LOVE your idea of Ron and Draco "testing Hermione's limits"--Yummy!!!
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From Clare1984 on November 23, 2007
wow - that last chapter was just fucking brilliant!

I have this strange love for seeing Hermione being used like that. I mean, chapter 2 was good but as soon as you brought Draco in, it just made the story even better. I love it when the 'good' characters go dark and with Draco, that can only bring out the worst in Ron which hopefully means more dirty talk and hot sex as they all try to claim Hermione.

I hope Harry's gonna get a bit more involved cos I love him when he's all dark and broody. It just seems like it's Hermione caught between Ron and Draco with Harry on the sidelines. I might be speaking rubbish though cos my brain is frazzled with the hotness that is Draco and its nearly 2am!

I also like Draco being angry at how Ron treats Hermione - I'm looking forward to how that is gonna develop. Hell, as long as there is lots of naughty sex and awesome writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 23, 2007

Another good set of ideas...I like these too...whatever works with Rei's genuis would be fine!
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