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By : reirei

From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 23, 2007
Oh, you have made me so very HAPPY!!! You stuffed Hermione like a Thanksgiving turkey. Goody!!! This is exactly how I always pictured the way the 3 wizards would take her. You even put them in the positions that I always thought they would choose the first time they did this. Yes, I expect to see them take her like this again. Actually, I expect Hermione to demand it of them--heehee--You said it was the greatest pleasure that she's ever known. I would think that she'd want to experience it again. Because Hermione is always scolding or chastizing him with her "Ronald" this and "Ronald" that, I always assumed that Ron would want to shut that pretty mouth up one day. As for Harry, he's the most mild mannered of the bunch, and I think he'd choose the most traditional spot. I always thought Draco would go for her ass. Actually, I always thought he'd spank it before he thrust inside it, but a reader can't have everything. The spanking would be Draco's way of paying her back for all her verbal insults over the years and for that time she socked him 3rd year (heehee).

I know that this is Soft Obsidian's fic, and you should go with her requests before mine. But if I might be permitted to put my two cents worth into how the plotline should go, I would love to see the jealousy between Draco and Ron play out with Harry acting as the go between to finally bring all 4 of them together. It makes sense that Ron and Draco are the ones making waves in this quartet. I've always thought they were a lot a like, and they both have a way of inciting Hermione's anger (aka passion) whereas brooding Harry inspires Hermione's protective and nurturing instincts. I reiterate. She needs all 3. NAUGHTY me (heehee)!!! I'd like to see good girl Hermione struggle with her attraction (and hopefully love) for these 3 males. A forceful Hermione who eventually makes up her mind to have and submit to all 3 wizards would be wonderful too. Yeah, I know. I don't ask for much (heehee), but I've got the right author for the job. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 23, 2007
Damn you're so nasty! LOVE it, I've been waiting for all 3 of them to hit it like that. I like the way you explained why Ron would share her with Draco and the way it pissed Draco off. Where to take it hmm...

maybe it would be fun to see either Draco and Ron get into some sort of competition to appeal to Hermione's masochistic urges...each boy testing her limits and trying to out dominate the other in order to win her affection while her non sexual relationships with them both get stronger, making it more complicated to choose for her and making them more possessive....or maybe Draco could actually try a new angle and try to get to know Hermione better non sexually and get in her head and try to make her see that Ron is not the one for her and is just using her....or maybe Hermione could play them all by getting her kicks on with each of them on the down low with an unexpected conclusion once its revealed?

eh..I don't know..you know I'm not good with plot Rei, that's why I issued the challenge...I trust you...you're brilliant as evidenced by your other stories...I'll be re-reading this chapter before going to bed tonight though for good dreams : )

'til my next review or your next update

:::big shit eating grin:::
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From ANON - Deirdre on November 22, 2007
absolutely in love with this one!! First Fic of this kind i read ^^U

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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 22, 2007
Please update this story. I check every day to see if you have added a chapter to it. I noticed that the other fic that you are currently writing has been updated several times. I realize that this fic doesn't have any where near the number of reviews that the other fic has gotten, but I think that you owe this story equal time. Yes, I'm pushy (heehee). Pushy equates to I'm REALLY enjoying this fic. If I didn't enjoy it, I obviously wouldn't review it. Lastly, Happy Thanksgiving!!!
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From ANON - TarnishedAngel on November 20, 2007
I am enjoying this fic quite a lot, and I eagerly await your next update. I LOVE the idea of Hermione being with Harry, Ron, and Draco. I never could pick which one that I wanted her to end up with in the final book. She's the only witch worthy of any one of them. IMO, Ginny, Lavender, Pansy, and the Patil twins can't hold a candle to her. Luna is the second most interesting witch in the books/films, but even she isn't quite worthy of these boys. Yep, I blame my NAUGHTY mind on the complete dearth of entertaining and complex female characters in the JKR universe. And now, because of your wonderful fic I don't have to choose a wizard. Hermione can have all 3. Goody!!! I HOPE that you don't let any other wizards have a go at Hermione. I especially HOPE that you don't bring Snape into this. I like Snape, but he should be with a witch closer to his own age--NOT Hermione. Additionally, I would LOVE a scene where Harry, Ron, and Draco take her simultaneously. That is my fantasy fic, and it's how Deathly Hallows would have ended if I'd had a say in the matter. Ginny would have died instead of Fred. Harry would have came to Hermione and Ron for comfort, and the sexual tension between Hermione and Draco would have finally been released. Of course, the book wouldn't have been fit for children. But, I digress. This is a VERY yummy fic. Please continue it.
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From reirei on November 19, 2007
Soft - This story is for you. The lack of reviews or whatever, aside, this solely for your pleasure because you are reading and reviewing my other fic :P

Now, what was initially difficult for me is finding an instance where Ron and Harry DONT listen to Hermione. Heh. The only time I could really come up with was the angsty 5th year where Harry kept starting crap with MZ...... kittycatporn Umbridge. Sooooooo here we go. As to what else,.... who knows what's coming for our heiress of masochism?

Hey, if you come to LA, I will buy you a drink, Lady! You are the best. Now back to plotting, and jumping my hubby for inspiration! teeheee.......
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 19, 2007
mmmm mmmmm......Draco and his big cock rule again...lol.

Ok, sorry, still coming down off my mental orgasm....I'll be civilized now-another great chapter Rei, I'm so glad you didn't inflict Crabbe and Goyle on her...so Malfoy will be exploiting Hermione on the regular now? hope Ron and Harry don't find out...or maybe I hope they do? lol

Still reading your masterpiece Time Lost, it'll probably will take me another week..I like reading it like I would watch a soap opera...a little each day. You know how you get some really good expensive candy and you want to savor it so you ration it out each day...it's kinda like that. I still can't believe that's your first fan fiction..but I digress...I know you don't like not getting a lot of reviews, so I'm sorry if this challenge is too pornographic for your average fan but I just wanted to tell you again that *I* love it and if you're ever in NYC, drinks are on me : )

::big cheesy grin:::
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From Hermyone on November 19, 2007
Wow that was hot and I'm with Draco, I can't wait either. Please update soon.
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From Carine on November 19, 2007
Hi ReiRei,
yes it's me,your personal stalker.You're switching the pairings so fast that it is very difficult to follow your tracks.(Reader grinns:but now I put a tracking charm on you,you can't escape any more.)Your new story is just sooooo hot.I wonder what Draco intents to do with Hermione and as the Snape-addicted reader that I am :WILL the HEAD of SLYTHERIN HOUSE have his go too.I hope so.A long quicky will do.Pleeeeease!!!Reader's on her knees and looking up at the writer with big puppy eyes O O
-- LOL Sureves Epans
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From alleycat88 on November 16, 2007
Malfoy's a sick bastard for watching them!.......er..I guess I am too then! HAHAHAHA! Nice chapter!
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From ANON - Raven on November 16, 2007
I beg! Please no Crabbe and Goyle on her! lol ewwwwww
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 16, 2007
Damn Rei...I didn't know you had it in you...while that's not true, I kinda knew but I didn't know you could delve this deep into it, and you know what I'm talking about....Chapter 2 was off the chain! It was really degrading, raunchy, perverted, & brilliant! Thanks for Dark!Ron ;) I can only imagine how this is gonna develop with Malfoy finding out...You ever consider writing smut professionally? no...seriously...

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From myangeldraco on November 16, 2007
regardless of that fact I still think this will be another excellent story!!!
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 16, 2007
Oh. my. God. This is gonna be so hot....I love the way you set it up....Hermione is a pain slut and Harry is angry...mmmmm...thank you thank you thank you...I don't care how short it is, you've already made my day, how do you write so much stuff in such a short span of time? OK, now I really do have a lot of reading to do....til your next update on any of your stories, night night Rei :::blows you a kiss:::
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From SoftObsidian74 on November 16, 2007
What the fuck??? LOL!!! I come online to read your latest update for Hogwarts Malestrom and I see my name for a story??! You're crazy as hell. Thanks so much for writing this for me......OK, I'm going to settle down and read Time Lost this weekend...I promise....you're the best.

OK, off to read my story now....I'll post my thoughts if I haven't gotten so hot and bothered that I have to sign off and get off first ;0
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